Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sat Sep 04, 2010 5:14 am

Hi
I didn't see this poem on facebook yet. Please tell me when you put it in facebook.
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:08 am

hello
i do'nt know when he'll put it on fb
u can ask him
his name is msaabneh
c u

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby fanuun » Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:37 am

NICE FLOW. YOU ARE REALLY GOOD.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:10 pm

thanks fanuun
i'd like to hear comment and i wish u pick up mistakes from my poem that i think u will give me expensive gift.
thnx again and accept my regards
c u and gd lk

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:27 pm

hi
I miss you all
Any new poem?
see you
{-; {-; {-; {-; {-;

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:33 pm

hello
really no new poems yet
may be in next few days, i don't know ...
poet needs inspiration
thnx 4 ur comment
c u

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Tue Sep 28, 2010 6:49 pm

Hi
I shall send you my picture to give you inspiration please write a poem on me
Thanks
Best wishes {-: {-: {-:

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 30, 2010 5:17 pm

inspiration isn't given by photos only it's given by chatting and feelings
now u know that? i hope u got it
any way i'll be glad to get ur photo, it's my pleasure to c ur face and figure....
c u

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Wed Oct 13, 2010 3:49 pm

Hello
Please can you write a poem about me?
I send messege to you please read it and answer me.
I will wait to read the answer.
Bye

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Aimee » Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:46 am

Really a heart touching poem friend. Noticing the word jail i first hesitated to read this poem. but now i feel happy that I read this. Superb!!!!!

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:37 pm

hello
thnx ur words really encourage persons to write more and more
thnx again
plz make me favor and always show me ur comments
c u and have lovely moments

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:34 pm

hello
this poem reminds me the days in the jail, although they were hateful days but they will stay in mind and won't disappear and i can't forget them. there is always sth which reminds u that.
i wanna just express my feelings.
forgive me

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:47 pm

REALLY U WAS IN THE JAIL
OHHHHHHH
U WAS SUFFERING IF U WAS IN THE JAIL

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:37 pm

yes i was in it and i suffered from that and i'm still suffering
god save me and all my friends

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:17 pm

woooooooooo,
i thought i read all of ur poems,but i missed this,
how great u r,u convey me in a moment from world to another,thanx.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:44 pm

hello
u r welcome and i thnx u 4 these comments , u seem so kind and soft. really i wish u read all my poems and send me ur point of view about my writings. we all learn and learn and one can't stop learing koz that refers to stopping the life and means death....
plz read and send me ur comments
c u

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 5:46 am

u r welcome,
there is a saying that "the great person is great untill s/he thinks s/he is great",
one has to learn to the last moment of his/her life,u r right,thnx :-D

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:30 am

hello
yes u r the person is so great unless that person claims the knowledge, in that moment s/he becomes ignorant and no more educated, koz s/he will stop searching and learning.
really i thought u r so educated and i invite u to try writing poems or short storied koz i think u can
thnx and hope lovely times

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 1:42 pm

u get the idea,
i thank ur invitation very much ,in fact u r motivating me,thanx.
i like writing poems and stories,but it depends on my mood {-;
i will try to have something new very soon ,and u of course will be the supervisor of me {-;
thanx again for regarding me as an educated person,it means a lot for me,that shakespear says so.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Mon Feb 21, 2011 3:45 pm

u r welcome and i'll be so happy to be ur helper in writing sth, just start any thing and u'll find urself making something great ...u'll find ur self making great work and u'll be proud of that..i'm sure u can but first put the idea infront of ur face and hold the pen and write what is inside ur deeps then ur pen won't stop .......thnx, u inspired me 2 say these lovely words and advices..
good luck

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:15 pm

hi,
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
have nice moments.


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