Ode from inside a jail

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby manal » Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:15 pm

hi,
i promise that u will read a new thing by me as soon as possible,and thank u for every thing.
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:34 pm

hello
i tried to write but i can't , i know that i have something to write about but i can't now ...y??????? i don't know y ? may be its koz of not holding the pen. poems inside our souls are like volvano, u can't excite it unless magma and melted things inside it boil, in that time the volcano excite and its magma will flow , our soul is like the volcano and the poems are like this magma so we have not to oblige our selves to write a poem.
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:01 pm

Hellooooooooo
i read this comment in your new subject with some changs but i think it is good
good luck

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:17 pm

hello
yes that's right i issued it in separate topic.thnx 4 this soft comment and have nice moments

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby farah » Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:25 pm

HELLO
I WANT TO WRITE SOMETHING BUT I CANNOT PLEASE CAN U HELP ME IN WTITING A POEM?
MY REGARDS AND PLEASE READ MY LETTER IN YOUR BOX IN ENGLISH CLUB AND ANSWER ME.
THANKS

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Wed May 11, 2011 7:53 am

hi
listen
poems can't be written by friends and by helping one another, i know one can help another by encoruging but to teach him how to write a poem , really i don't know
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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby xtragirl » Thu May 12, 2011 11:49 am

Hmm.. My comment for now, it's so good and touch my heart..
You know, I feel that I'm in that jail..
Imagine for what I will do..
So far with someone I love..
So sad..

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat May 14, 2011 6:26 am

hello
thnx .......
really u encouraged me with these lovley words and i hope u send more comments about other poems.......
u seem so good in this comment and i hope u try to write poems or any literatur writing
c u
my best wishes

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Lara » Mon Aug 01, 2011 3:06 pm

hi :) Shakespear, i already told u i loved this poem. I hope you do not miss this great gift that you have to write poems, and God continue giving you lots of inspiration. Bye

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Aug 05, 2011 7:08 am

hi lara and thnx
so am i
hope not to lose this gift of God...pray 4 me to get inspiration
thanx again

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 11, 2013 12:51 pm

hi all my friends....some thing reminds me this poem...really i like it much....koz its part of my personality...
have lovely time...
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Thu Jun 13, 2013 4:02 pm

Have you been in a jail?

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:01 pm

hi elisa...yeah i entered the jail for about 11 months then i was released , but after that i felt the jail come inside me.....i think u got the meaning....i meant i'm scared now and i fear my shadow...
any way..its now just memory...
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Fri Jun 14, 2013 4:34 pm

I am so sorry for you. Fear is a bad beast!

Ciao.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Fri Jun 14, 2013 9:04 pm

thnx 4 ur soft feelings...really i used to fear every thing ...in the street, in the flat, in the scholl, even the bed...its frightful ...some times i awake from sleep and turn my pillow to discover there's nothing...it's tragedy....

where are all my loyal friends...the place seem empty...
why did that happened to this club??
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our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 15, 2013 8:40 am

Rich people use psychotherapy, other people use religion...I prefer a bar of good chocolate :)

But ..tell me...What do you think there could be under the pillow?

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:13 pm

hi again/

as u said everyone uses sth different to cure self...may b one of us wana escape to uncertain place just to forget the problem....some use religion to dive in worshipping and adoration, to get patience for facing that problem...for me i preter the last one...i mean worshipping...

in that time, i just had got out from my nightmare and i dont know now why i refuged that time to the place under my pillow....may be i was afraid of sth..a bomb or snake or a ghost or some thing else....may be i wanted to become armed against any probable danger so i turned my pollow looking for a gun or a knife or any weapon perhaps i might find there....

these are my thoughts ...may be i'm wrong and i've 2 face my problems once and twice..more and more....till i used to live peacefully....
any way thanks 4 ur interest and hope u nice time....
have nice moments u and all my friends...
good luck
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 15, 2013 4:49 pm

I am sorry, you seem so sad.

How can I help you... maybe telling you that under your pillow you can find only your pyjama or some money that the tooth fairy left for you... but probably this cannot cheer you up.

I wish you all the best, ciao.

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Re: Ode from inside a jail

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 15, 2013 7:03 pm

hahahahah.......thnx ...really u seem so funny...ok real friend who wants to give happines to his/her friends
at least u could make me laugh..
thnx again
our life is like a night mare


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