Can you understand me
Oh my sweet dream! You’re better than reality
There are no words can express my deep feeling
For your sake, I lost my kin, left my city
All blamed me loving you, how can one quit healing
Can I live without you? I need your pity
Oh love! Stay with me! You have good dealing
------------------------------
On those soft hillocks, I put my tired head
Relaxed, I slept for ever, I got a nice dream
The high sneer’s voice woke me” Bad omen” he said
“Jupiter’s angry, you should leave your hope beam”
If Jupiter see her, he’ll fall ill in bed
Don’t blame me! On chest I hold my seam
--------------------------------
Oh my God! I wish I were her mirror
So I can look at her face every time
I wish I were her comb, in hair no horror
I wish I were her ground, touch me her prime
The dervish left his den to be her adorer
You’re my hope, my pleasure, you made me write rhyme
------------------------------------------
Can you understand me and my love-words?
So you should try love again and again like birds
------------------------------------------
sometimes, the reality is better than all sweet dreams but often we can't find this chance so we have dreams to escape from our bitter reality.
can you understand me?
Moderator: EC
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
-
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 1036
- Joined: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:35 pm
- Status: Other
- Location: some where behind the sea
Re: can you understand me?
goodevening
my freind shakespear
u alaways impress me and members here with ur writes ,u named urself shakespear and u really desreve this name
this time ur poem named (can u understand me ) but this time i'm sorry koz i can not understand the love u talk about that fake rare love maybe i did not live in such loving mood
i hope to understand the LOVE ur talking about just for once in my life
takecare
my freind shakespear
u alaways impress me and members here with ur writes ,u named urself shakespear and u really desreve this name
this time ur poem named (can u understand me ) but this time i'm sorry koz i can not understand the love u talk about that fake rare love maybe i did not live in such loving mood
i hope to understand the LOVE ur talking about just for once in my life
takecare
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
hello
real love and false love are inside our hearts
if u love really u'll feel that ur sweetheart with u in anywhere at anytime.....
in ur dreams, in ur work, in ur play , in ur sadness and in ur happiness....
be destroyed but don't defeated as in the novel " the man and the sea" koz if u stop that means
u reach death.
read my words and think closely u'll find i'm right
thnx
real love and false love are inside our hearts
if u love really u'll feel that ur sweetheart with u in anywhere at anytime.....
in ur dreams, in ur work, in ur play , in ur sadness and in ur happiness....
be destroyed but don't defeated as in the novel " the man and the sea" koz if u stop that means
u reach death.
read my words and think closely u'll find i'm right
thnx
-
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 1036
- Joined: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:35 pm
- Status: Other
- Location: some where behind the sea
Re: can you understand me?
i read ur comment
real love and false love are inside our hearts
ur right in that we make love true or not but how we find that love ???
real love and false love are inside our hearts
ur right in that we make love true or not but how we find that love ???
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
ok
people still with us and keep the real love those who deserve our love
but the other who leave us quickly we thank god they left us koz they don't deserve our love
thnx
people still with us and keep the real love those who deserve our love
but the other who leave us quickly we thank god they left us koz they don't deserve our love
thnx
-
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 1036
- Joined: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:35 pm
- Status: Other
- Location: some where behind the sea
Re: can you understand me?
NO COMMENT
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
hello
no comment
what does this mean?
really i didn't know ur agree or not
so plz say ur view even u opposite me koz i always respect ur idea and view
thnx and cu
have nice ead
no comment
what does this mean?
really i didn't know ur agree or not
so plz say ur view even u opposite me koz i always respect ur idea and view
thnx and cu
have nice ead
-
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 1036
- Joined: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:35 pm
- Status: Other
- Location: some where behind the sea
Re: can you understand me?
no comment on the poem but itold u i do not think that there is true love in this world maybe there is but not in my world
that my view opint
takecare
that my view opint
takecare
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
hello
thnx
really i'd like to advise u and advise my self that we've to take off our black- glasses may be we see the world in different look, may be we see it in colourful look....
don't look at empty half of the glass but look at the full half of it
u'll say u r more pessimistic than me, i say yes but the reality we have to change our mind, our look to the world round us, don't u agree with me?
take care
thnx
c u
thnx
really i'd like to advise u and advise my self that we've to take off our black- glasses may be we see the world in different look, may be we see it in colourful look....
don't look at empty half of the glass but look at the full half of it
u'll say u r more pessimistic than me, i say yes but the reality we have to change our mind, our look to the world round us, don't u agree with me?
take care
thnx
c u
-
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 1036
- Joined: Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:35 pm
- Status: Other
- Location: some where behind the sea
Re: can you understand me?
well thanx for ur advise and i'll try ur advice maybe it's works oneday
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
u r welcome
u always advise me i decide that today i advise u
take care
thnx
u always advise me i decide that today i advise u
take care
thnx
- farah
- Rising Star
- Posts: 84
- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2009 1:49 pm
- Status: Learner of English
- Location: iraq
Re: can you understand me?
hi
I think it is great although I don't know more in poems
good luck
I think it is great although I don't know more in poems
good luck
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
hello
say know much not more
thnx 4 ur feelings
c u
say know much not more
thnx 4 ur feelings
c u
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
hello all
nice to meet my friends
gd lk
nice to meet my friends
gd lk
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
- Lara
- Rising Star
- Posts: 181
- Joined: Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:57 pm
- Status: Learner of English
- Location: http://my.englishclub.com/profile/Lara07
Re: can you understand me?
Hi again... none of our dreams are the same as reality, that's why we dream to be even momentarily out of reality. Bye
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
can we get rid of our reality?
i don't think so
i don't think so
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
shakespear wrote:can we get rid of our reality?
i don't think so
we can't get rid of our reality...i think so
- shakespear
- Top Contributor
- Posts: 973
- Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
- Status: Teacher of English
- Location: turkey
Re: can you understand me?
i forgot i wrote this poem...shakespear wrote:Can you understand me
Oh my sweet dream! You’re better than reality
There are no words can express my deep feeling
For your sake, I lost my kin, left my city
All blamed me loving you, how can one quit healing
Can I live without you? I need your pity
Oh love! Stay with me! You have good dealing
------------------------------
On those soft hillocks, I put my tired head
Relaxed, I slept for ever, I got a nice dream
The high sneer’s voice woke me” Bad omen” he said
“Jupiter’s angry, you should leave your hope beam”
If Jupiter see her, he’ll fall ill in bed
Don’t blame me! On chest I hold my seam
--------------------------------
Oh my God! I wish I were her mirror
So I can look at her face every time
I wish I were her comb, in hair no horror
I wish I were her ground, touch me her prime
The dervish left his den to be her adorer
You’re my hope, my pleasure, you made me write rhyme
------------------------------------------
Can you understand me and my love-words?
So you should try love again and again like birds
------------------------------------------
now i remember why i wrote it
our life is like a night mare