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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:14 pm

u r welcome
u always advise me i decide that today i advise u {-: {-: {-:
take care
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Re: can you understand me?

Postby farah » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:34 pm

hi
I think it is great although I don't know more in poems
good luck :-D :-D :-D

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:23 pm

hello
say know much not more
thnx 4 ur feelings
c u :mrgreen:

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:51 pm

hello all
nice to meet my friends
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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:34 am

hi

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:28 am

Hi again... none of our dreams are the same as reality, that's why we dream to be even momentarily out of reality. Bye

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:44 am

can we get rid of our reality?
i don't think so

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:41 am

shakespear wrote:can we get rid of our reality?
i don't think so




we can't get rid of our reality...i think so

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Re: can you understand me?

Postby shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:20 am

shakespear wrote:Can you understand me

Oh my sweet dream! You’re better than reality
There are no words can express my deep feeling
For your sake, I lost my kin, left my city
All blamed me loving you, how can one quit healing
Can I live without you? I need your pity
Oh love! Stay with me! You have good dealing
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On those soft hillocks, I put my tired head
Relaxed, I slept for ever, I got a nice dream
The high sneer’s voice woke me” Bad omen” he said
“Jupiter’s angry, you should leave your hope beam”
If Jupiter see her, he’ll fall ill in bed
Don’t blame me! On chest I hold my seam
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Oh my God! I wish I were her mirror
So I can look at her face every time
I wish I were her comb, in hair no horror
I wish I were her ground, touch me her prime
The dervish left his den to be her adorer
You’re my hope, my pleasure, you made me write rhyme
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Can you understand me and my love-words?
So you should try love again and again like birds
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i forgot i wrote this poem...
now i remember why i wrote it
our life is like a night mare


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