She...........

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nice moments to u toooooo
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sweets

It is really fantastic, amazing

but at my point of you, it is just not a poem.

hi girl, this (she) is yourself, your feelings

it is not come from your imagine. It is really you

Something happend in your life and you may lost the real lover. I hope so

Pls my dear girl few friends in this forum replied as it is a poem

but I won't accept it is just like a poem. It is you

whatever it is I consider you as my daughter Pls compromise yourself

on the way i came to that site, this poem impressed me

bye to everybody
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venuchetan

Many thanx to ur comment
coz u like my odd much and you are right about the odde snice it talks about me and my feelings towards situation in that time. but time can cure cure such feelings and let memorries about that

anyway thanx agiane and i hope to like my next oddes too

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hello

i really interested each word,

nice feeling despite being difficult.
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thanx manar for ur commemt
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