you're poor

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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Wed May 18, 2011 10:27 pm

hello
u r so welcome and i hope we can communicate more in future...
have nice moments
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:52 am

hi
i wana collect my poems and issu them in one topic
wt u say?

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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:07 pm

Hi again ! i this is a sad poem, was this poem about u or about anyone else?
Well noanimal is upper than a human, and besides u mentioned above, also a person is poor when he/she lacks of knowledge or feelings and thoughts... have a lovely day u 2 :)

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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:09 am

i meant there r rich ppl treat poor ppl like animals or may b less than animals and may b treat their dogs or cats better than the poor

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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:13 am

So in this case, these "rich people" are the poor ones, their heart is poor.

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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:02 am

woooooooow
i think its rich expression
thnx 4 this expression
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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:41 pm

who is the poor one in this world????

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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:40 am

humm Shakespear dont make me say names :lol:
the one who doesnt appreciate friendship and the one who just care about him/her and not about the others, and the one u mentioned in ur poem, the rich guy who thinks money is all in his life.

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Re: you're poor

Postby muruganji » Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:45 pm

Respected Lara (Please ignore the above one)
the one who doesnt appreciate friendship - That is True.
the one who just care about him/her and not about the others- That is not true, Don't Hurry and decided. Then There is no difference in between you and me. I considered, you are really great one.

As Shakes told you should go for good things along with everybody except me(Bad thing).

I will not come anymore in the ring

I hope, Shakes may be forgive me in future

But I will read your(Shakes) forthcoming poems without your permission

regards
Murugan

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Re: you're poor

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:35 pm

Hello respected Murugan

I wanna u to know my heart cries out for peace between us, does ur heart also ask u for that? :-D

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Re: you're poor

Postby muruganji » Sun Oct 16, 2011 2:28 pm

Dear Sweets

Well said and Thanks

But I can't come again in the ring.

I am a piece of a full glass. You can't stick it as it is before.

day by day Slowly i communicate with you and others. Now I like this club.

World is big, I will go with other members

Seriouly I said goodbye to you and friends.

Here no one can worry about it though i should say "bye"

Yesterday I am good, today I am bad and tomorrow?

we are all mixed by good and bad things. Openly I can say.

But we consider others by Ratio of good and bad. If one have good things in higher percentage than bad things, we consider he/she is a good.

If the bad things percentage is higher than good things, we consider, he/she is bad. I do not know who I am?

u need not reply for my post. Keep going ahead. God and myself with you

Take care

Murugan
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Note: Respected Lara, I still concentrate in myself, But my heart did not say anything as you said

regards
Murugan

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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:48 am

hi all my friends


i hope u happiness and pleasure


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