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Re: you're poor

Postby muruganji » Sun Oct 16, 2011 2:28 pm

Dear Sweets

Well said and Thanks

But I can't come again in the ring.

I am a piece of a full glass. You can't stick it as it is before.

day by day Slowly i communicate with you and others. Now I like this club.

World is big, I will go with other members

Seriouly I said goodbye to you and friends.

Here no one can worry about it though i should say "bye"

Yesterday I am good, today I am bad and tomorrow?

we are all mixed by good and bad things. Openly I can say.

But we consider others by Ratio of good and bad. If one have good things in higher percentage than bad things, we consider he/she is a good.

If the bad things percentage is higher than good things, we consider, he/she is bad. I do not know who I am?

u need not reply for my post. Keep going ahead. God and myself with you

Take care


Note: Respected Lara, I still concentrate in myself, But my heart did not say anything as you said


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Re: you're poor

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:48 am

hi all my friends

i hope u happiness and pleasure

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