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Re: WE KNOW

Post by Krisi » Tue May 31, 2011 1:05 am

shakespear wrote:.... don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late
I didn't quite understand this part. :-|

(I was just following the thread of replies thinking I could get deeper meaning of the poem...)

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Re: WE KNOW

Post by shakespear » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:50 am

hi
ok listen
she asked him to wait koz she was afraid from people , she asked him not to be close to her and he answered her that they are late in getting the happiness, they r late in living happiness moments and the life will end soon , they'll reach to the life-fall
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Re: WE KNOW

Post by shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:34 am

hi friends
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Re: WE KNOW

Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:39 am

shakespear wrote:We know

I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know

hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lose our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !

after correction
our life is like a night mare

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