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We know

I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know

hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lost our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !

sorry for all readers...
i want to correct a word at the line 12" we'll lost..."
the correct is " we'll lose"
thnx for all readers

hi shakespear and welcome back,
in fact the most important feature that attract me in urpoems is the simpilicity in attrance with the strength in meaning,how great u r friend,keep it up

thnx friend u always present here to encourage me and i thank god i know u
thnx again and have lovely moments

shakespear is always welcome

my dear friend

u always inspire me to write but i'm sure that my writes will not be like yours

this time ur odd reminds me with that game "i know "

so I know that you know nothing stay at all and who knows what this heart carries for u ?

hi
i meant by this odd " i know that u know i'm in love with u "
the 2nd line means" ask u whatever u like i won't say no and i'll obey"
then if u refused me so when will i go koz i have none but u and no place,
i know and u know that my back became like bow koz i spent my life waiting for u to accept me, and because the hurt of ur love i said oh and oh and oh....and lots of oh that i suffer from ur bueaty...
this is the 1st stanza and i wish u can express the 2nd stanza
good luck

ok according to my stand for this stanza let me say ................
that lover wanna love he wanna to feel that he belongs to some one ...he wanna feel with stability he wanaa she to cheat him if she can but not leaving him .

for she i guees she is asking him to wait coz she is afraid from manythings and she refuses to till him why

this is my comment

hellooooooooo
u r not only sweet but in addition u r clever and i said u r perfect
that is right he feels that he belongs just to her not to another one that koz of his passion, his love, his ador,....
he asked her not to say wait koz they were late in living togather, don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late
thnx

hi
(she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late)

i guess ur right that her biggest fear

hello
really u r so frank and we all r afraid and care 4 that koz we r arab and u know what does that mean...
anyway i hinted at that but u explained it frankly
thnx , u shorten the way...

so if traditions and open-mind thinking are in quarrle what he soultaion?

ok its so hard matter.... a quarrel between the educated and the back... and i think in our time , the back will win koz most ppl like money and not like science.
think of it plz

i just feel lost in all this situation i do not know what should i do satisfy myself or family and society ?

hmmm
ok u have to harmonize among them so u can satisty all of them
i know u understand me so u don't need and explanation.
c u

Hello
Harmonize .... I think this word refers to a kind of hypocrisy....Hypocrisy means u wanna satisfy all quarreling persons either they were right or wrong, my point of view is that we can't agree with those who are not right
thanks

hello
its not a kind of hypocrisy ....its a kind of wisdom to satisfy all persons and even ur enemies
but i respect ur point of view
thnx

well i have nothing to comment about..............

hi sweet
wt's ur opinion about hypocracy?
plz i wanna know ur idea about it
c u

Hello
I think it is good poem
good lukk

hello farah
we all wait 4 u to give us something , plz send us a poem or story or anything
thnx and have lovely times

shakespear wrote:hi sweet
wt's ur opinion about hypocracy?
plz i wanna know ur idea about it
c u

u know the old say (it's impossible to satisfy all people wishes ) so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

this is my opinion

hi all,
i gree with u sweets,but donnot u think that sometimes we may be obliged to do so?
i mean ,is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?

sweets wrote:u know the old say (it's impossible to satisfy all people wishes ) so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

this is my opinion

that is very good sweet and i agree with u really i have another say" satisfying people is ungetable purpose....
"

manal wrote:i gree with u sweets,but donnot u think that sometimes we may be obliged to do so?
i mean ,is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?

and about ur say manal i think the loyal person won't be obliged to do so koz hypocracy is lie and the rope of lie is very short, in addition there r many loyal people are free from this bad habit....
thnx
best regards

[quote="shakespear?[/quote]
and about ur say manal i think the loyal person won't be obliged to do so koz hypocracy is lie and the rope of lie is very short, in addition there r many loyal people are free from this bad habit....
thnx
best regards[/quote]
u r right shakespear,
but if we look inside ourselves more accuracly,we may find some blemishes here or there.it is the natural disposition of all human kinds,otherwise there would be no difference between angles and human beings!
what loyal people do is to struggle to cultivate our selves to be good.
thanx

hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course

hi sweets,
thnx,and
best regards...

really good
go on.

sweets wrote:hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course

i don't agree with u and i think there r lots of ppl have loyalty and free from this bad disposition...
really i respect ur say :

sweets wrote:you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

this is the only fact in the world
thnx

shakespear wrote:

sweets wrote:hi manal
u said"is there NOWADAYS any person free from this bad disposition?"
my answer is no one is free of that of course

i don't agree with u and i think there r lots of ppl have loyalty and free from this bad disposition...
really i respect ur say :

sweets wrote:you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

this is the only fact in the world
thnx

ur welocome my freind and ur free in ur thoughts

monaji
why you do not share us this disscution ??????????????????

sweets wrote:ur welocome my freind and ur free in ur thoughts

hellooooooooooooo
this is ur say

sweets wrote:so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

this is my opinion

it was ur opinion and now u r no longer adopting it, really u bewildered me.....

I confused you ??????? how I did that?

[quote="sweets"]so how long you play on hypocracy rope you'll fall oneday . you might get benfits from hypocacy but in sametime you are loseing yourself respect

excuse me:
shakespeare,do u think that we may have another opinion other than this??????
ofcourse sweets is completely right in what she said,the idea is not if it is good or bad because it is a determined issue that hypocracy is nothing but losing once respect!!!!!!!!
here i would like to clarify my view that nowadays or may be even in the past days it is rarely ,if not impossible ,to find someone who is completely free from such a bad tember with respect to the Natural Human Disposition!
thanx and sorry for disturbance
good luck.

hello
thnx 4 this explanation and u didn't disturb me....
so u and sweet wanna explain the facts and u r not adopting the idea , so that's well and great.
thanks all and accept my respect

ok,i have talked about my self and given it the right to replace sweets,but if sweets has another opinion ,of course ,she is welcome.
thanx all.

hello
thnx manal and i hope u r ok u and all the ppl here
have lovely times and sweet moments
c u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

welcome back , dear shakespeare,,,i am happy to reread from u..thanx

hi
thnx 4 ur replying and u r welcome every time
c u friend

HELLO
ALL IS KNOW HERE AND ITS DIFFICULT POETRY I THINK SO

hi
its not difficult just read it once and twice and plz concentrate on it , read among lines u'll fine wt u can't understand
have nice moments

shakespear wrote:.... don't say wait koz she was afraid of ppl may they see him and his lover togather, the life will end soon and they r late

I didn't quite understand this part.

(I was just following the thread of replies thinking I could get deeper meaning of the poem...)

thnx

hi
ok listen
she asked him to wait koz she was afraid from people , she asked him not to be close to her and he answered her that they are late in getting the happiness, they r late in living happiness moments and the life will end soon , they'll reach to the life-fall
thanks 4 ur comments

hi friends
hope happy times 4 u all

shakespear wrote:We know

I know that you know
ask me I won't say no
we're friends, don't you think so?
if u ignore me, where I’ll then go?
I know and you know
my back became like a bow
o dear! hundreds oh and oh
your beauty made me undergo
I know that you know

hurry up an' don't say wait !
we always are slow and late !
we’ll lose our intimate date
cheat me if this is my fate ,
check me and tell me the rate !
cheat me but don't say wait !
cheat me , you.. I won't hate,
that I know you are my fate
then accept me in any state !

after correction