Who is my destiny?

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Who is my destiny?

Postby Lara » Fri Aug 05, 2011 9:22 pm

Why is love the most difficult thing to find?
I look at every where and I can’t see you
Where are you? Why can’t I meet you?
What happen? Are you there? Or there?
No! Why don’t you come to me?
Why can’t I see you? Oh God
Is that my destiny? What am I looking for?
My lover, my loneliness
Will we be together someday?

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Re: Who is my destiny?

Postby sweethuman » Mon Aug 08, 2011 5:25 am

It will come to you at its appropriate time. DONT WORRY :mrgreen:

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Re: Who is my destiny?

Postby Elisa » Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:27 am

yes, it will come but you have to help the destiny!!!

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Re: Who is my destiny?

Postby Lara » Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:50 pm

Thank you both, i appreciate your comments, both of you are right :), God will decide when is right time. :)

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Re: Who is my destiny?

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:26 am

hi
ur words reflect sadness and loneliness .....always u show sadness and yearning
u seem alone............y?
have nice moments

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Re: Who is my destiny?

Postby Lara » Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:47 pm

hi again shakespear thanks, maybe it is because of experiences i have had during my life, and now im expresing them in this way, have nice moments u too.


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