I’m a foreign in my world

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I’m a foreign in my world

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I found you in the right moment
When I felt everybody was attaching me
I live in a world where all around me is full of hypocrisy
I don’t know who my friend is really and who my enemy is
I want to escape from that world where I feel as a foreign.
I want to feel protected from people who want I decline
I felt vulnerable when my first pillar disappeared
Now I’m crying, I want everybody leaves me alone
I can’t hear anybody; I don’t know any body here
I’m hurt and I don’t want to hurt anyone
Tell me you what I’m doing wrong; tell me what the right is.
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Lara wrote:Tell me you what I’m doing wrong; tell me what the right is.
i like this term
i think u r good poetess
my regards new friend
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actually i dont think it is a poem, im not a good writing, but thanks :)
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hi
i think u have high expressions and valuable idea, lovely meanings
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Thank you!!
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As I read two of your peoms, you seem so much discouraged and unhappy from the worlds and friends etc. Just be happy and enjoy your life.
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Thanks a lot :)
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