Moon and Sun

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Moon and Sun

Postby Lara » Sat Aug 06, 2011 9:21 pm

You are as sun and moon
They will never be together
Is this happening to me only?
Everyday we call ourselves
to not to forget the love we feel each other
How can we continue with this?
You are as real as the stars,
At the same time you are a dream
A dream which I want to keep in my mind everyday
I want to continue with this love fighting against the distance
Yes, we live in different worlds
We will live as sun and moon
But we will always be as loyal as they are

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby sweethuman » Sun Aug 07, 2011 5:32 am

Why you are always complaining of your love?

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby Lara » Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:48 pm

Hi again, maybe because when i find my love, this is impossible for some reason.

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby sweethuman » Mon Aug 08, 2011 5:21 am

Do you have a love now? or you are just imagining?

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby Lara » Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:53 pm

hi...actually yes, but as you read it's impossible, im not imagining :)

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby sweethuman » Tue Aug 09, 2011 11:26 am

Hmmm. So I will pray for you both happy life

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby Lara » Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:57 pm

Thank you, you seem a good friend :)

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:49 am

Lara wrote:You are as real as the stars,
At the same time you are a dream

hi
u know how 2 express ur feelings clearly and u have lovely picture here...
i like these lines ...it seems fantastic
have nice time
my best regards

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Re: Moon and Sun

Postby Lara » Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:42 pm

hi shakespear, i appreciate your comments thanks a lot :)
my best regards 4 u2


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