Moon and Sun

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Moon and Sun

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You are as sun and moon
They will never be together
Is this happening to me only?
Everyday we call ourselves
to not to forget the love we feel each other
How can we continue with this?
You are as real as the stars,
At the same time you are a dream
A dream which I want to keep in my mind everyday
I want to continue with this love fighting against the distance
Yes, we live in different worlds
We will live as sun and moon
But we will always be as loyal as they are
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Why you are always complaining of your love?
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Hi again, maybe because when i find my love, this is impossible for some reason.
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Do you have a love now? or you are just imagining?
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hi...actually yes, but as you read it's impossible, im not imagining :)
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Hmmm. So I will pray for you both happy life
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Thank you, you seem a good friend :)
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Lara wrote:You are as real as the stars,
At the same time you are a dream
hi
u know how 2 express ur feelings clearly and u have lovely picture here...
i like these lines ...it seems fantastic
have nice time
my best regards
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hi shakespear, i appreciate your comments thanks a lot :)
my best regards 4 u2
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