DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:17 am

thanx for cheering up me freind i promise to write sooooooooon

takecare

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:00 am

hello
i know u can do it so i'll be waiting 4 u to show me ur new poem
have lovely moments

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:22 pm

i hope that i could write one sooooooooooooooon

takecare

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:09 pm

hello
i know u can
just take pencil and write anything so u can finally read a wonderful poem
c u

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:45 pm

i promise i'll do my best as long as i found pencile

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby muruganji » Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:04 pm

Dear Sweets

There is no need pencil to write for a poem

You speak,the sound is Music, when you speak, words are coming out

These are Lyrics, when you smile with shy

Several Butterflies flies in Shakes mind

If you there with shakes, every year becomes a minute to him

If you not there with shakes, minutes are becomes years to him

You are the inspiration to Shakes

Murugan

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:41 pm

ohhhhhh murgan
ur like moon beams that come in clear nights

thanx for cheering up

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:06 am

hello friends
muruganji wrote:If you there with shakes, every year becomes a minute to him

i think this term can be soft line of lovely poem....
my friend muruganji thnx 4 this comment but plz don't guess things koz its private
any way thnx 4 ur comment

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby muruganji » Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:15 pm

Dear Shakes

I am so sorry to open the concept in between both of you
But I can't control myself

We really glad with fullfill after seen Titanic, after readed with romeo julite. lila and Majnu

samething members should give green signal to both of you

Any way, you are the ocean you appreciate me through about my poem

I have to say here about one thing

You are the Hero in this club and I am your friend

In Indian Cinema contains the hero's friend always help hero's Love

Moreover he sacrifice his life at the enemies of the hero,for his friend hero's love

I am friend of Shakes

Anyway you appriciate my lines

Thanks

Muruganji

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:16 am

hi my friend muruganji
its my pleasure to b ur friend and i wana say sorry koz i blamed u about this matter ....plz don't be sorry that i have to b sorry ...u r so kind and i hope we can be close friends
my regards and best wishes
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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:57 am

helllllllllllllllllo
sorry for being absent all that time
i'm happy that things are ok between u and murgan

have a sweetday for both

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 26, 2011 8:02 am

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

I am so sorry to open the concept in between both of you
But I can't control myself

We really glad with fullfill after seen Titanic, after readed with romeo julite. lila and Majnu

samething members should give green signal to both of you

Any way, you are the ocean you appreciate me through about my poem

I have to say here about one thing

You are the Hero in this club and I am your friend

In Indian Cinema contains the hero's friend always help hero's Love

Moreover he sacrifice his life at the enemies of the hero,for his friend hero's love

I am friend of Shakes

Anyway you appriciate my lines

Thanks

Muruganji



hi murgan
i'm so happy that u could mange things btw u and shaki and thanx for trying to fix things and thanx for being my freind

i wanna read ut updates in a message plz

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby muruganji » Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:37 pm

Dear Sweets

These are your arrangements I knew

Unless he does not know about me

Thanks He understood me

Thanks you are the reason for it

Murugan

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 29, 2011 5:34 am

thnx friend
i hope u r well and hope u write more and more to enrich us with lovely things
c u and have nice moments

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby wendywenyuan » Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:00 am

Hi ,Dark .ur poem moved me a lot ,u are gentle and fragile in ur side from ur poem .
but now u are not weak anymore ,u are strong enough .the deeper love u dedicate ur beloved
; the deeper hurt u would get...we are human being, not angel,not satan,I believe that u have ur own magic trick which convert u perfect.moving on

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:37 am

woooooooooow really its lovely comment...
my friend wendywenyuan
thnx for sending this sweet comment and i hope we can communicate in future more and more...thnx againg
keep contact plz
have nice day

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:31 pm

hi all
i think we'd better forget bad things and just look at good things so we have to try and try once and twice till we get our goal..
thnx

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:48 am

Peace & Love in this Club :-D

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:40 am

Lara wrote:Peace & Love in this Club :-D


thnx and i pray god to give us mercy and keep me and all my friends safe...ya rab


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