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DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:57 am

helllllllllllllllllo
sorry for being absent all that time
i'm happy that things are ok between u and murgan

have a sweetday for both

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby sweets » Fri Aug 26, 2011 8:02 am

muruganji wrote:Dear Shakes

I am so sorry to open the concept in between both of you
But I can't control myself

We really glad with fullfill after seen Titanic, after readed with romeo julite. lila and Majnu

samething members should give green signal to both of you

Any way, you are the ocean you appreciate me through about my poem

I have to say here about one thing

You are the Hero in this club and I am your friend

In Indian Cinema contains the hero's friend always help hero's Love

Moreover he sacrifice his life at the enemies of the hero,for his friend hero's love

I am friend of Shakes

Anyway you appriciate my lines

Thanks

Muruganji



hi murgan
i'm so happy that u could mange things btw u and shaki and thanx for trying to fix things and thanx for being my freind

i wanna read ut updates in a message plz

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby muruganji » Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:37 pm

Dear Sweets

These are your arrangements I knew

Unless he does not know about me

Thanks He understood me

Thanks you are the reason for it

Murugan

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Mon Aug 29, 2011 5:34 am

thnx friend
i hope u r well and hope u write more and more to enrich us with lovely things
c u and have nice moments

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby wendywenyuan » Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:00 am

Hi ,Dark .ur poem moved me a lot ,u are gentle and fragile in ur side from ur poem .
but now u are not weak anymore ,u are strong enough .the deeper love u dedicate ur beloved
; the deeper hurt u would get...we are human being, not angel,not satan,I believe that u have ur own magic trick which convert u perfect.moving on

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 18, 2011 3:37 am

woooooooooow really its lovely comment...
my friend wendywenyuan
thnx for sending this sweet comment and i hope we can communicate in future more and more...thnx againg
keep contact plz
have nice day

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 13, 2011 10:31 pm

hi all
i think we'd better forget bad things and just look at good things so we have to try and try once and twice till we get our goal..
thnx

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby Lara » Fri Oct 14, 2011 4:48 am

Peace & Love in this Club :-D

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:40 am

Lara wrote:Peace & Love in this Club :-D


thnx and i pray god to give us mercy and keep me and all my friends safe...ya rab

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Re: DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Postby shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:50 am

shakespear wrote:DON'T MAKE ME WEAK

Closely she whispered, her breath touched my ear
Time ago I didn't think of my past life
Now suddenly I feel inside me fear
In My heart, you have hard fixed your blunt knife
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She begged me not to make her weak next time
She used to be strict, hard as her father
She can't bear lovely speech, she hate soft rhyme
Try just once, than before you'll be smoother
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I made you of illusions, desires, and dreams
My statue will fall at the bleeding end
You work hard to destroy all my hopes, beams
unseen sky, deep seas… me you like to send
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God created us all of water and soil
On the earth ,the sons of the sky can't live
always you make my blood in my veins boil
we're not angels holding branch of olive
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I don't listen to you, though you are wise
No more I do open my heart's window
That I believe in my fatal demise
Accepting my fate, I start feeling low
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I know you desire me more as I do
So don't say any more, "Don't make me weak"
We are both alone, we can't find love in true
We have no time to spend on check or seek
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The wheel of the world's law will still revolve
We are not stones, dry trees or blocks of ice
How can we convince our needs? can you solve?
If the stone can breed, it will be very nice
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I'm not satan and you are not angel
I have virtues and you may have a vice
You have magic stick? convert the devil!
We make it once, why don't we make it twice?
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after some years i discover i have a poem. i like this poem
in fact, every poem i'd written represents parts of my identity.
REGARDS...
our life is like a night mare


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