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Re: safe shore

Postby shakespear » Sun Sep 25, 2011 9:14 am

hi all my friends here in this club ...i feel this club not as active as it was in the beginning so i wana ask every one here to activate this club and invite our friends those who interest in poetry and novel and other literature.....thnx

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Re: safe shore

Postby shakespear » Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:44 am

hello all my friends
have nice moments
my regards

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Re: safe shore

Postby Elisa » Sun Oct 16, 2011 3:46 pm

Thanks to Shakespear and all poets of this forum. I like your poems and I always read them.
They help me to improve my English and, at the same time, to feel good.

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Re: safe shore

Postby shakespear » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:45 am

Elisa wrote:Thanks to Shakespear and all poets of this forum. I like your poems and I always read them.
They help me to improve my English and, at the same time, to feel good.


its my pleasure u read my poems my loyal friend
have nice moments

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Re: safe shore

Postby shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:12 am

shakespear wrote:
shakespear wrote:Bad past in mine, our future will be clean

i wana here correct small mistake
"is" in stead of "in"
Safe shore
During day, I hold my candle look for him
I see nil that I need more than two eyes
Beside the eyes, we need heart soft, undim
You want the truth? So why do you tell lies
You want me good? You have to wear a trim
Sadist; you're aroused when your lover sighs
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Search well, you'll find him close reply your pray
You needn't light, needn't eyes, you need your soul free
Release your soul and let it find the way
The Lord loves you, at once plant a love tree
The love will grow just water it aday
Leave your home now and come to his country
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Your hair isn't golden, your eyes are not green
Southern, Northern…it isn't a matter yet
I feel your misery even it's unseen
You prevent me so give me needs and set
Bad past is mine, our future will be clean
Jealousy which kills you, you have to let
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You always suspect me, you won't get rest
Rough sea of lust round me, hold please my hand
Save me, hold me to the shore, to your chest
To where sun with breeze, hillocks on soft sand
Take me with you to any place, east or west
You made me fly high, please let me now land
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thnx


after correction
3rd stanza i corrected: bad past is mine....instead of....bad past in mine, i.e: "is" instead of "in"
thanks for all
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our life is like a night mare


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