i won't ask you

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i won't ask you

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I won't ask you

Trust me it is true, I tell you no fibs.
You're in my heart, among the ribs.
Inside my mind, control my sensations.
You chase me, like shadow, to all stations.
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I don't need to ask, about you, my love.
Our life put us, on the torture curve.
You stream inside veins with my blood.
Like a stormy tornado and violent flood.
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You paralyze my limbs, like a snake-sting.
And control me, you break my wing.
You're like me lost here and there.
And always lament the time in anywhere.
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Days come, days go, they steal happy times.
I won't ask you, why you wrote rhymes.
That I know utterly, you don't know.
But I'll still love you, don't you think so?
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hi
its old poem but really i look for it but in vain and i couldn't find it so i issue it here again...plz 4give me if u found it twice
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gd morning
to wakeup and reading such poem thing is pleasing me why ?????? koz there is some one still beleiving in pure love and never give up
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shakespear wrote:You stream inside veins with my blood.
Days come, days go, they steal happy times.
i lked this phrase :)
yeah manly hapinness disapear, time makes them to disapear, and sad moments come, when happiness goes, sadness appears and viceversa.
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thnx friends
have lovely moments
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