goodmorning lara
i wanna tell u (read poem carefully and u'll got her name ) for me i got it (:
AN ANGEL ON EARTH
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
Hello Sweets, thanks , but at last i could do it, it was difficult; this because i dont know arabic, but stating that it isnt an excuse.
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
hi laraLara wrote:Hello Sweets, thanks , but at last i could do it, it was difficult; this because i dont know arabic, but stating that it isnt an excuse.
as u said it's not a excuse .........maybe in his new poem u'll got her name try to dig well next time
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
sweets wrote:maybe in his new poem u'll got her name
Terrible wrong in grammar sweets you can't use " can +past tense" so be careful in the next time friend..
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
WONDERFUL POEM....I KNOW HOW U MENTIONED HER NAME IN THIS POEM...THE NAME IS THE SAME TITLE , TEALLY GTEAT.
GOOD LUCK
GOOD LUCK
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
wt means this???farah wrote:TEALLY GTEAT.
but thnx 4 this comment...
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Re: AN ANGEL ON EARTH
shakespear wrote:AN ANGEL ON EARTH
What a lovely face shinning with youth
What sensitive depths of charming smile
What a holy beauty, I live in its truth
An angel brought me to a burning pile
I loved her since I met her in the booth
My love increased after I read her file
………………………………………………..(1)
"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
………………………………………………………….(2)
Wake or sleep I say your name every time
You coddle me and call me with alias name
"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chime
And I coddle you, I always do the same
Angel You took me back to my past prime
Your love gave me happiness, and gave me fame
…………………………………………………………….(3)
A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mind
And put me in a puzzlement, that faint mole
Red berry on lips and neck of a hind
Your Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soul
On your cheeks I read holy words and find
When can I reach my desire and my goal?
………………………………………………………….(4)
You asked me to say your name in my poem
Can't you find out your name? I've just said it
For your sake, I'm ready to leave my home
And follow you, to enjoy your soft wit
To Lima of Peru or even to Rome
Save you to me, and all things can not fit
………………………………………………………………(5)
i mentioned her in the 2nd stanza...discover
our life is like a night mare
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