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AN ANGEL ON EARTH

What a lovely face shinning with youth
What sensitive depths of charming smile
What a holy beauty, I live in its truth
An angel brought me to a burning pile
I loved her since I met her in the booth
My love increased after I read her file
………………………………………………..(1)
"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
………………………………………………………….(2)
Wake or sleep I say your name every time
You coddle me and call me with alias name
"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chime
And I coddle you, I always do the same
Angel You took me back to my past prime
Your love gave me happiness, and gave me fame
…………………………………………………………….(3)
A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mind
And put me in a puzzlement, that faint mole
Red berry on lips and neck of a hind
Your Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soul
On your cheeks I read holy words and find
When can I reach my desire and my goal?
………………………………………………………….(4)
You asked me to say your name in my poem
Can't you find out your name? I've just said it
For your sake, I'm ready to leave my home
And follow you, to enjoy your soft wit
To Lima of Peru or even to Rome
Save you to me, and all things can not fit
………………………………………………………………(5)

shakespear wrote:"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"

when i read the poem, I loved this phrase

Shakespear! What a nice poem
Someone who is really in love, leaves anything to be with his/her love, and it seems you are, then do not give up and fight for that love, c u :)

shakespear wrote:AN ANGEL ON EARTH

What a lovely face shinning with youth
What sensitive depths of charming smile
What a holy beauty, I live in its truth
An angel brought me to a burning pile
I loved her since I met her in the booth
My love increased after I read her file
………………………………………………..(1)
"Mention me" she said "if you like me a lot"
"And say a lovely poem on our story"
"Let me feel your love, do you care or not?"
"Add me to the high state of the glory"
"Keep me close, no water the rose will rot"
I've mentioned you and I won't be sorry
………………………………………………………….(2)
Wake or sleep I say your name every time
You coddle me and call me with alias name
"Sweetie" and other names, all have that chime
And I coddle you, I always do the same
Angel You took me back to my past prime
Your love gave me happiness, and gave me fame
…………………………………………………………….(3)
A mole on a rosy cheek stole my mind
And put me in a puzzlement, that faint mole
Red berry on lips and neck of a hind
Your Eyes are as pearls, they relax my tired soul
On your cheeks I read holy words and find
When can I reach my desire and my goal?
………………………………………………………….(4)
You asked me to say your name in my poem
Can't you find out your name? I've just said it
For your sake, I'm ready to leave my home
And follow you, to enjoy your soft wit
To Lima of Peru or even to Rome
Save you to me, and all things can not fit
………………………………………………………………(5)

i wrote this poem when a woman from Jordan asked me to mention her name in my poem, and i did it.
her name is Malak.