The feeling of Love

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The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Sun Sep 25, 2011 10:54 pm

The Feeling of Love

We are complete strangers in a bubble
We are trapped and alone with no escape
There is no entry or exit, why are we here?
We don’t choose who we’ll love, it just happens
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We can not run away our fate; it’s in front of us
A new love story is about to begin, we can’t deny
This love story is already written, it’s God’s will
We are the main characters in there, the actors
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We were taken to a bubble, a new world
Now our will is to stay here forever
Outside, reality is killing human beings
They hurt each other; it’s a world full of pain
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Our bubble is our protector, it’s a wall
This barrier that surrounds us is called love
It is the purest feeling created by God
Love makes our boundaries are limitless
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You make all the darkness in my life shine
Our feelings destroy all types of storm
There’s no outside force that can beat them
Only you and I can live it, and that's our love

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:35 am

Lara wrote:We are complete strangers in a bubble
We are trapped and alone with no escape
There is no entry or exit, why are we here?
We don’t choose who we’ll love, it just happens

really we can't choose our destiny and we r like birds in traps so we can't escape...i think it fact
i chose this stanza koz i feel its real and exprsses lots of meanings
really lovely poem and has high expressions
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:48 am

shakespear wrote:really we can't choose our destiny and we r like birds in traps so we can't escape...

that's right we can't decide our destiny or the person whom we wll love. im thanksful for u comment :) bye

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby sweets » Mon Sep 26, 2011 6:09 pm

hello lara
well i think when people fall in love they be stranger even to themselves people totally change when they fall in love i like your description that love is like bubble.

it's simply happen {-;

thanx for this sweet poem

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:25 pm

sweets wrote:when people fall in love they be stranger even to themselves people totally change when they fall in love


I am grateful for your comment Sweets :) i always take them into account, thank u!! bye

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:40 am

hi friends
love is like bubble.....i don't think so koz bubble vanishes soon while love perhaps lasts for centuries...so the smilie isn't in its place....i meant the true love but if u meant the false love or the desire,libido,lust, appetite so its the same thing...koz all these, i meant, libido, appetite, lust, don't last long....we can find in coitus and lovemaking....
i just wanted to show my point of view..
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:47 am

Shakespear!!!! I meant true love, sorry but this time i dont agree with u because, if u didnt notice in the poem i said :
" Our bubble is our protector, it’s a wall
This barrier that surrounds us is called love
It is the purest feeling created by God
Love makes our boundaries are limitless"
That bubble is the LOVE (true love) which is surrounds the couple.

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:56 am

hi
i don't agree with u also in this say koz bubble represents our appetite, lust, not the true love which can last for ever...think about it little and u'll find that bubble can last even if we take care of it....nothing in this life is like true love...i think so

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:05 am

Ok friend :D, all we have different point of view about what true love is, and in this case we will never agree, i know that "false love or the desire,libido,lust, appetite" wont never last forever, but i didnt talk about false love. On the contrary, it was about pure love, which if u dont care of it it will desapair as u said, but it(true love) can last forever

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:14 am

if we say true love or pure love that will include all things which make love lasting for ever,,caring, sacrificing and other things..so don't try to make me convinced in ur idea... ;-)
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:26 am

:P i wont say anything else because i think we will end in a boxing ring, don't u think so? :-D

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby sweets » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:41 am

take it easy kids

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:04 am

no Sweets :) i dont think im a kid, maybe Shakespear hasn't matured :D... we can not agree with this topic

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Vega » Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:01 pm

Well written)

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:24 pm

Lara wrote:maybe Shakespear hasn't matured

its one of the bullets which u got from arguments
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:34 pm

shakespear wrote:
Lara wrote:maybe Shakespear hasn't matured

its one of the bullets which u got from arguments


Hi everybody specially to Shakespear!!!, i wanna u know i dint say that as an offensive term, ok , im sorry if u felt insulted, defenitly i learned according to culture, thoungts people do not catch things as we want they capture.
Peace and Love
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:59 pm

thanks friend 4 this and i hope u happiness and pleasure in ur life
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Wed Sep 28, 2011 1:46 am

Thank you!!! for u whish, i also wish u happiness and pleasure friend :)

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby shakespear » Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:10 am

hi friends
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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby Lara » Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:56 pm

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Re: The feeling of Love

Postby gloriacollins » Thu Oct 13, 2011 6:13 am

Hello Lara

Lovely poem..And i sure that you are in love...:)


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