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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby sweets » Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:25 am

sure i'll feel free

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Sat Oct 22, 2011 4:59 am

hello
so what did u decide to do? issue it or not? really i prefer u issue it after correct ...its urs ..u created it and gave it ur idea..ur words...

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby allison » Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:48 am

How could you write about woman's sorrow since you're a man? Are you sure of how women feel?

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:35 pm

hi may be u r right in this point but i imagine the sorrow of woman and try to transmigrate the role of a woman and write sad feelings of her...any way nice to hear ur point of view...have nice moments

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby farah » Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:00 am

It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:53 am

farah wrote:It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.

u can make sure of that if u come here near me....
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shahidsaif » Thu Jan 17, 2013 1:16 pm

Cool Cool info for me. :lol:

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:55 pm

shahidsaif wrote:Cool Cool info for me. :lol:


what does that means??
plz explain it...any way thanks lots
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby dreamer » Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:23 pm

hi can u guess who am i shakespear??
be urself

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:43 pm

hi all my friends...
dreamer...really idk...but ur name is so lovely...we all need to dream and fly in the blue sky...have nice moments...
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:26 pm

hi dreamer.....at last i could know u...but really if u didnt help me i couldn't know u ....any way i'm so happy to meet u again and know about u....
thnx to help me knowing u...
c u
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 08, 2016 1:28 pm

shakespear wrote:A woman's sorrow

How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
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All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
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My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
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You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
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Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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imagine the sorrow of this woman...wt's her end???
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby farah » Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:46 pm

I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT EMBODIES THE SORROW OF A WOMAN
we have to live our life freely

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Sat Jan 16, 2016 4:46 pm

do u have sorrow like hers???
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Krisi » Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:22 pm

shakespear wrote:ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????


what is real love?

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:41 pm

what do u think about real love???
i answered u by a question...ok ?
when u answer u'll find the answer for ur question
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Krisi » Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:20 am

that's not the answer to my question. I asked you that same question so it couldn't be the answer.

is there real love and untrue love? love is love. So, I guess it is either love and a lie only.

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 19, 2016 11:09 am

aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Krisi » Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:23 pm

shakespear wrote:aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love


I guess you mistook love for like and vice versa.
For me, I do not use love for a thing or situation because they have no feelings. I can use the word love to human beings and my pet dogs. But, I don't know how others differentiate this. And, from what you have stated above they are all the same to you.

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 19, 2016 3:04 pm

mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Krisi » Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:23 am

shakespear wrote:mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??


I guess, it's because we have different beliefs. This is also why I raised the question, "What is real love?"

About your last question, I am sorry, I cannot answer that because I am a female. I really don't know when (or where else) do you use the word, "like". You see, a female friend of your friend (who is a boy or girl) is also a girl friend...then also for lovers, the male/boy use the same word also to introduce his sweetheart.


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