A Poor Brother feelings

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Re: A Poor Brother feelings

Postby sweets » Tue Dec 06, 2011 7:05 pm

just read the message
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Re: A Poor Brother feelings

Postby shakespear » Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:33 am

I am seeing, there is a female doll

the verb "see" from the sensation verbs so it doesn't come in continuous present tense and instead of that it occures in simple present

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Re: A Poor Brother feelings

Postby muruganji » Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:32 pm

Dear Shakes

This is great time I had you know
Because you respond to my odd

I considered already you do not know, you are the great in this forum and in this club.

So, I am in pleasure and to my eyes, this mistakes is not a important.

Why?

You responded.

That's enough to me

Where are your other friends?
tell them to come here

Please forgive me if already I wounded your heart


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Re: A Poor Brother feelings

Postby shakespear » Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:29 pm

dear friend
u r welcome and don't mention plz ...we have to forget the past and throw it behind us and not to look at it again...
thnx 4 ur kind words
have good luck

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Re: A Poor Brother feelings

Postby sweets » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:32 pm

i'm glade to hear that past is past between you :) :)


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