BETWEEN ME & HER

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Sun Dec 18, 2011 8:57 am

sweets wrote:thanx for cheering up friend but when heart is lost ..when mind is busy..when soul is missed when you feel that time is running and you can not catch it how can i hold my pen again ??!!!!


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw this term is intrinsically, in its self considerd as lovely poem...u r kidding when u say u have lost ability to write poetry koz the term u wrote is a great evidence that u can write a poem easily...i wish i said this term or i thought in this term ..and i'll make it lovely poem...u have to try this term and decorate it to create from it lovely poem...i wish i have ur ability to imagine things in lovely sights like u...u r the best if u try hard and try ur best...u can make things from nothing...think of my speech and u'll find ur way to write and create..
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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby sweets » Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:08 pm

shakespear wrote:
sweets wrote:thanx for cheering up friend but when heart is lost ..when mind is busy..when soul is missed when you feel that time is running and you can not catch it how can i hold my pen again ??!!!!


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw this term is intrinsically, in its self considerd as lovely poem...u r kidding when u say u have lost ability to write poetry koz the term u wrote is a great evidence that u can write a poem easily...i wish i said this term or i thought in this term ..and i'll make it lovely poem...u have to try this term and decorate it to create from it lovely poem...i wish i have ur ability to imagine things in lovely sights like u...u r the best if u try hard and try ur best...u can make things from nothing...think of my speech and u'll find ur way to write and create..
best wishes friend



so ur insisting on to write and create maybe i should try let me see ..think and create newthing
thanx for supporting friend

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:13 am

sweets wrote:so ur insisting on to write and create maybe i should try let me see


yeah i think the 1st step to write ...if u have time and wish to write so u can do it...koz if u don't have desire to that u can't write a letter and i wana u think and try...
i'll be waiting for u ...
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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby sweets » Mon Dec 19, 2011 5:43 am

what's really killing me that nothing deserve to write about ...everything around me is big illusion people are turning to machines ..kids without any innocence..every thing is depending on (give & take) so if you have nothing to give you can not touch anything ...........so come on wat shall i write about ..about fake love or imaginative perfect world .....lost paradise or how people are living in peace and happiness !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

just tell me koz i'm lossing my mind

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:49 am

doesn't sun shin in ur country...can't u see it every day...is there a moon in the sky during nights..stars...butterfly...do u still have imagination about innocence and kind, merciful mothers and fathers...can't u imagine severe love and soft one...can't u write about violence towards ppl all over the world....
i think there r lots of images and u can catch some of them and paint a lovely picture
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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby farah » Sat Feb 04, 2012 11:21 am

NEW POEM I DID NOT READ IT BEFORE

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:50 am

farah wrote:NEW POEM I DID NOT READ IT BEFORE

enjoy reading it plz...
have nice moments

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:54 am

sweets wrote:what's really killing me that nothing deserve to write about ...everything around me is big illusion people are turning to machines ..kids without any innocence..every thing is depending on (give & take) so if you have nothing to give you can not touch anything ...........so come on wat shall i write about ..about fake love or imaginative perfect world .....lost paradise or how people are living in peace and happiness !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

just tell me koz i'm lossing my mind
shakespear wrote:doesn't sun shin in ur country...can't u see it every day...is there a moon in the sky during nights..stars...butterfly...do u still have imagination about innocence and kind, merciful mothers and fathers...can't u imagine severe love and soft one...can't u write about violence towards ppl all over the world....
i think there r lots of images and u can catch some of them and paint a lovely picture
regards


so did u think about my view...about my speech...many things in this world deserve to write about....dont they???

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 22, 2013 7:11 pm

BETWEEN ME AND HER

I:
I always think I can leave
But I didn’t try it before
You're my candle, now I believe
Without you, my heart is sore
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She:
I'm your candle, I burn my prime
Just to light your so dark way
But I know from the first time
I need you 'nd can't stay away
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I:
Don’t hate me I can't bear it
I know your heart's often sad
For me, I think you're so fit
You're an angel, but I'm bad
**********************
She:
in my heart, you stabbed your knife
On my back, is still its bunch
I hate you but I'll hate life
And my heart bleeds so much
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I:
I'm Punic, you're queen Didon
In my heart, you had a throne
And all things sweet you'd done
Don’t leave me in world alone
But you, I have got no one
In my life, the sun's shone
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She:
I loved you but I was late
Its wrong, I'm not your queen
You enslaved me in last date
I love you and I've no bean
I'm sure you're my lovely fate
I try to hide but its seen



i wrote it as a dialogue between me and her....so every one has his own explanation....
our life is like a night mare

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby dreamer » Sun Nov 10, 2013 8:04 pm

"I loved you but I was late"

i guess she is still thinking it's too late

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Mon Nov 11, 2013 7:01 pm

hi...
there's still glimpse of hope that u come here and send a comment...i'm happy...
listen i remembered a poem from u or may be its an idea from u about that woman who is waiting in a railway station...waiting her lover but in vain...
u promised to try writing a poem...and till now we see nothing...
i hope u r trying now...
have nice moments
our life is like a night mare

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby dreamer » Thu Nov 14, 2013 10:55 am

when words die in lips why pen should speak??

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 25, 2014 12:42 pm

yes dreamer u can write excellent poem
our life is like a night mare

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby dreamer » Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:23 pm

between u and me words are not nothing just let our eyes talk
between u and me many feelings are on crash
anger ..happy ...mad or in love

between u and me .........let's live our dream

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Re: BETWEEN ME & HER

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 26, 2014 10:39 am

hi at last i can open my account after long time of trying to enter ...any way i'm sorry 4 my delay and now i want to issue a new poem and hope that all my friends here can show me my mistakes so i apologize in advance about any mistake
see u soon
our life is like a night mare


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