All the world is a stage

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:02 pm

hi italian person
thnx 4 this expalanation....so u can tell us little about italy and how is life there...do u like it??
thnx again
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Thu Jun 20, 2013 11:35 am

Dear Shake,
You couldn't find the best moment for asking me this question. I enjoy the best of my country.
I spent a long, long weekend at the seaside.
Good Italian food, wine, soft as milk, sun and sea.
In two words, a paradise:).
Italy is the best place of the world where spending our holidays. In few hours you can pass from the mountains to a lake or to the sea.
There's only a thing I hated in these day: jellyfish!
Don't ask me to write about politics or economy, I am not on the right mood. Maybe in another moment.
Wish you all the best:)

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Fri Jun 21, 2013 4:53 pm

hi friend...
thnx 4 the expalanation...and i won't ask u about politics or economy at least in this moment koz u of ur mood...any way u made me like to visit this paradise...how is it in winter? is it cold or warm?? how is it in summer hot or warm??....


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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 22, 2013 11:26 am

Italy is beautiful in every season and in every season you can go to swim or to ski.
In the North, weather is cold in winter. In summer it is warm, especially in the mountains where it's rarely hot.
In the south people grow oranges and you can swim all year long. Thanks to its climate in Italy you can always find many varieties of fresh vegetables and fruits.
Culture and monuments make you breath the history of this wonderful country.
Ciao.

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 22, 2013 12:32 pm

thnx 4 this information....really u made me like 2 visit italy....i like suck marvelous climate....may be i visit it when i manage 4 that...
have nice moments
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Sat Jun 22, 2013 5:06 pm

YW

I am sure you will be enthusiastic:)

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Sat Jun 22, 2013 8:18 pm

surely i'll if u will be with me there...... {-;
thnx.....
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:01 am

Aren't you a woman? :!!:

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:05 am

Is this EC or a matrimonial agency?:))

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Mon Jun 24, 2013 8:34 pm

hi ...
i'm so sorry but trust me i ddn't mean to disturb u or any one here....
and i ddnt ask ur hand...really i just meant that it'll be so nice if u show me ur city...
any way...plz 4give me u and all my friends here in this lovely club...
have nice moments
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Tue Jun 25, 2013 7:17 am

You are great..belive me. {-;

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 10, 2013 4:40 pm

thnx a lot..u2..really i wish u keep contact with me koz u seem so kind...always have nice moments...i d k wt happened to me koz i'm not able to write poems...i feel i have sth inside...my soul wants to expel poet...but i can't say it
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:54 am

I wrote just a Rhyme to laugh!

I know you are a teacher of rhymes.
Maybe my poor poem can give you the start for the best and famous poem of your life {-:

Shakespeare or Neruda will be nobody in comparison with you ;-)

JUST A RHYME

“Are you a friend of mine?”
I ask to a crocodile

“When you are on my frontline
Must I run for a mile?

Laughing or crying is the same to you
And the true is a point of view!

Are you a friend of mine?
Tell me dear crocodile”

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Sun Aug 25, 2013 1:45 pm

hi ...i think u start good rhyme and i made some modifications..i hope u don't mind...but i think u have ability to write poems if u try it hard....thnx 4 every thing...best wishes....plz read my modifications:

“When you are on my frontline
i imagine you'll be mine
so i run, to get you,for a mile
and my lips will just show a smile
-------
Laughing or crying for me, is the same
every thing in this world is mere fame
without meanings, so what is the name?
your love turned me lame
-----
are you a lover, love to me, send?
or an enemy or a loyal friend?
or a bad omen came from the hell
or a soft balm will make me well?
--------
are you a deer or a crocodile?
can i trust your tears for a while??
we all will be kicked outside
so tell me please the truth don't hide
----......
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Mon Aug 26, 2013 5:52 pm

Thanks for your modifications. You are great {-:
I’ve tried to go on. I know I have to practice a lot, anyway it is really funny.
It’s very useful to learn and remember new words, too.
Best wishes, thanks to read it.


"Loyal friend you can me call
but don’t hang me on the wall

in your mind you can me find
and a smile always remind

In the mountains I run and stay
But I dream to fly to the UK

Writing poems for you my dear
is not easy without a beer

Feel you free to love or hate
every person near your gate

If someone will kick us outside
under a cushion we will hide

This stupid poem I am stopping now
Have a good day and a sweet CIAO!

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:45 pm

hi
congratulations..
at last u put ur foot on the poetry's way....and i say to u...

it's so lovely to say that
with me, you try so lovely chat
from you i read sweet rhyme
and spend so happy time
you easily get the right way
so we can meet and play
at last you have sweet day
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Fri Aug 30, 2013 1:57 pm

This is for a friend who has a strange opinion of European people.

Every human we can say
Find obstacles on his way
Strong and positive we stay
bad thoughts we blew away

Working hard and correct behave
Now we are in a safety cave

Our feelings are precious things
they are not for bad kings.

English language and conversation
That’s the why of participation

If it is not the same for you
I will try with the voodoo :lol: :lol:

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:30 am

waw....u r a great poetess now...i think u r better than me....
best wishes
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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby Elisa » Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:56 am

Thanks for compliments.
Have a nice day. Ciao!

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Re: All the world is a stage

Postby shakespear » Tue Nov 12, 2013 5:20 pm

ciao...
how r u???
show me another rhyme....don't stop....move ahead....
c u
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