Doubt

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Mermaid
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Doubt

Postby Mermaid » Sun Jul 28, 2013 4:43 am

Sinking deep in the darkness
desperately looking for just a spot of light
anything white
just a way out
found nothing but more dim
Instead of a route
to search my soul out,
a maze was found
with no way out
what was ultimate once
Now it is all doubt
Lost I have become
among the crowd
Tried so hard to make myself proud
hope left me with in vain trials to make everything right
To the ground my shoes' ties held me tight
In a loud voice I wanna shout
Get me Out
Let me out
To my sacred world I shall be retired
Where I will keep no being, no one to make me shattered

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shakespear
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Re: Doubt

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 07, 2013 9:16 am

Mermaid wrote:Now it is all doubt
Lost I have become
among the crowd
Tried so hard to make myself proud
hope left me with in vain trials to make everything right
To the ground my shoes' ties held me tight
In a loud voice I wanna shout
Get me Out
Let me out


hi...it's so lovely lines...i like them and ur poem is great....we all need more and more like these strong expressions...
regards
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Doubt

Postby Mermaid » Wed Aug 07, 2013 9:56 am

Thanks a lot :)

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Re: Doubt

Postby shakespear » Wed Aug 07, 2013 2:13 pm

u'r welcome friend...
have nice moments
c u
our life is like a night mare

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Re: Doubt

Postby kathipearl » Sat Nov 08, 2014 7:47 am

If you wouldn't be here to feel the same thing.


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