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I am now in the day, the day when suddenly the darkness come and covered the world, and I become blind since then.. all I can only see shadows.. It come and go with a silence.. and.. without I realize, the darkness has become a part of me..

Within the darkness.. everything are so quiet.. so..hurtful... The sparkle that used to be my guardian.. its gone.. gone like an ash.. it didnt left anything. When I am silence... noone around.. nothing to feel.. nothing to reach.."where is my sparkle?" I asked myself..

"I am scared.. my sparkle's gone..." "What should I do?" I cried and cried... tried to yell, but... no voice comes out... only tears were falling down.. I tried to look for something.. anything.. but only darkness and silence Ive found... the more I ve tried the powerless I am.. I cried and cried again.. til I am fall asleep, but when I wake up.. everything still the same... silence... I sat..hugged my self..staring...wandering and wandering..

Help me..

We cannot perceive the light without the darkness.
Regards,

hi
i think it's a short story...there's an expression in it....i think u speak about a nightmare and the darkness and how it's dreadful...there are some mistakes in ur story...i hope u revise it and discover them...
go ahead...u r very good
c u

frankly ........thanx to share us with your first steps of ur writing but u should more next time realy good that was owsome.............

"we can't percieve the light without the darkness" . Indeed. The way our mind work is to compare which matchs and which does not match. it works by similarity or contrast. It's the way used by our computers as well.

When ....
When you open your eyes, I do see the hanging garden of Babylon*** When you smile, the world be a light*** When you whisper, I do hear a ninghtingale song *** When you stand up, the sun rise*** If I were an Angel, I would descend from the heaven *** If I were a dolphin, I would leave the sea*** If I were the sun, I would rise by night, *** to be beside you***

Thank you fore expressing such a true feeling. Who may have got like those feelings always find out the way towards him(herself), towards the quietness, towards the happyness