A ROSE & A HELL

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 8:29 pm

hi
icant go on kox now my heart feels sad...y i feel ur tears rising in ur eyes, r they?
y i cause sadness 2 u & 2 myslf...u won in the poem....i wana u win....koz i u & u me , its mess
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 8:38 pm

it's not a battle to have winner in

i just wanna re-live my talent as we were remmber shaki?? those sweet mad days

sorry if i hurt u but as u said iu & u me

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 9:43 pm

Is it hard 2 find kind heart now a days? 4 me its not koz i hv my dearest & u kno that
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:33 pm

it's not hard to find one but the hard is to search well and ur too lazy to do that search

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:42 pm

God granted me so sweet , educated ..sweets & that's enough.
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:45 pm

don't make her shy that little girl is vanishing

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:04 pm

If she vanishing, im vanishing 2.... U kno, she's full of sweets
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:06 pm

sweetness is'nt work nowaday the curle is winner at this time

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:22 pm

Sweets may be an adjective or a name, u got it?
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:26 pm

cu around busy man
and think of new line to start our game

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:31 pm

I use mobile with hacking so its weak...nothing make me busy on u
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:37 pm

u become hacker tooo!!!!!!!!!

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:44 pm

Just 2 get net...noth else
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 16, 2014 7:41 am

start with this word:
when....
when can my cheek lay on ur cheek?
when can my lips touch ur lips?
when can my hand confound in ur hair?
comb it and temper ur neck?
is it possible or it's no way?

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Wed Apr 16, 2014 2:50 pm

when sun meet moon
when we meet
i'm in to u

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 16, 2014 4:32 pm

when can i meet u, and look into ur eyes?
when can i take u, and take u to my chest?
when can my chest touch urs? feel ur heat?
when my hopes come true and live in ur paradise?
million " when" but none can be fact...

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:04 pm

when millions be true
when all starts be 4 u
when i can say i luv u?

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:31 pm

when will the bright star visit me?
when will my lover mercy my heart?
when will i climb that florid tree?
and my mouth suck delicious fruit?

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby farah » Wed Apr 16, 2014 9:25 pm

shakespear wrote:when will i climb that florid tree?
and my mouth suck delicious fruit?


I like these two lines. What did you mean with these two lines??
Please check your inbox.
I am waiting.
Good night.
we have to live our life freely

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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby shakespear » Wed Apr 16, 2014 9:49 pm

mmm ok listen;
florid tree refers to fortile female, when delicious fruit refers to sin or refers to forbidden fruit of Adam in paradise...when he eats that fruit feels of his nakedness..i think u know the tale...
thnx 4 ur comment and i'll check my inbox..
gd nyt
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Re: A ROSE & A HELL

Postby dreamer » Thu Apr 17, 2014 7:30 am

when i be u
when smiles be true
and life combain us too


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