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shakespear
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Sep 17, 2017 11:36 am

dreamer wrote:you wanna me statue without cries
if u said: you wanna me statue without cry....i think it's better to keep rhyme
u r better than me, during 9 minutes u could make these wonderful lines,
ok
my turn:
You're not a statue, you're my life
........................... I find you when I open my eyes
You're my death and its knife
............................ You're my joy, you're my cries
You're peace, and you'er strife
............................. To me, in this world, you're the prize
our life is like a night mare

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:58 pm

come on get me wht u wait for
catch the time before it flow
show me the paradise you promised me before
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Sep 19, 2017 12:29 pm

i don't know
i feel i am idle
let me gather my mind
our life is like a night mare

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