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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Jan 26, 2016 5:24 pm

so it's my role but i can't fine u here, i think u left this game...if u like to continue so plz reply here and let's continue our game
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Wed Jan 27, 2016 6:41 pm

image a light inside a lighter
how shine can be ... how sad is he
surround with thousand siege how he can be free
like child catching a dream
like flower bending in breeze just waiting a chance to be released
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Thu Jan 28, 2016 3:45 pm

so lovely...u r still the best my loyal friend, i wana teach from u lots
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Fri Jan 29, 2016 9:46 am

i guess its ur turn do'nt go away
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Fri Jan 29, 2016 5:03 pm

u made me do this game with u, and u suddenly stopped , and as u know, in the beginning i didn't wish to say poetry but u could Pull the rug from under my feet in one way or other, i was like ice, without senses and u warmed me and now i feel like the first step...really i feel dead...i d k
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sat Jan 30, 2016 6:29 am

it's ok let's stop the game
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sat Jan 30, 2016 2:20 pm

y??? wt apity!!! i hoped u say ur role , and u say my role but not stopping
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:07 am

i wrote my lines
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Jan 31, 2016 2:15 pm

where's your line and if u wrote it then write another line instead of me, read my last comment carefully
shakespear wrote:y??? wt apity!!! i hoped u say ur role , and u say my role but not stopping
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:28 pm

r u there? y don't u reply and make ur role??????????????
i'm waiting
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Tue Feb 02, 2016 10:47 am

I wanna fly over there
I wanna fly heigh oh dear
Where Things get small
Where no at worries all
I wanna fly let me go
Leave my hand let me go
IWanna fly over there
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:01 am

don't leave me alone, take me with you
my soul with you will leave me too
my soul's your slave, you slaved me
so don't leave me, with you i want to be
take me far, take me high
let me touch you, hear your sigh
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:18 pm

i wrote my role .........now it's urs...........i'm waiting
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sat Feb 06, 2016 11:13 am

don't leave me alone, take me with you
my soul with you will leave me too
my soul's your slave, you slaved me
so don't leave me, with you i want to be
take me far, take me high
let me touch you, hear your sigh


these r my last lines ...so wr r ur lines??????????????
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 07, 2016 5:06 pm

sooner or later,all friends will quit
in my place alone i'll sit
why do all bad ideas come
all friends leave, i can't find some
you are my lone friend
your leave is my end
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 10, 2016 2:45 pm

i'm here my special friend
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Wed Feb 10, 2016 4:14 pm

look around raise your hand to them
you are not alone and that's not the end
life is full don't be dull
it's not only shades it's colorful
remove dark shades catch my hand and come
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Wed Feb 10, 2016 6:18 pm

i see nothing, i see just dust
where are my friends, where's their lust
i can see your shadow, it's so sad
i'm yours, i'm not bad
for years, you try to vanish the sigh
you want to be lost in my eye
i fly with you, i fly and fly
i caught your hand, you took me so high
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Thu Feb 11, 2016 12:56 pm

take my hand follow me
you will see what i see
i see new world new life
take breathe and show me your best
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Thu Feb 11, 2016 2:45 pm

y always do you win?
y always do u show me my sin?
I shall follow u to the end
give me ur hand, your x, to me send
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Thu Feb 11, 2016 4:46 pm

think carefully my friend
no one winner we all have sins
just drop all behind don't even think
take my hand i'm waiting to come
be urself

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