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Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2016 11:47 am
by shakespear
angels have no sins
you're clear, white like ice
sometimes a loser wins
but you're nice and will still nice
i hope you'll go to the dise
it's not chance, it's not dice

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2016 12:51 pm
by dreamer
why you're so black dear
days will shine don't see
i see your heart is like little star wait to appear
remove darkness of your heart and you'll see

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2016 1:49 pm
by shakespear
i can't remove it's sticked with me
and much shine, i can see
wars kill the hope the beam
i'm now far of the team

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2016 4:32 pm
by dreamer
close your eyes
don't think of time
fight for yourself ..for your dreams
war can't kill your soul can't kill dreams
close your eyes and tell me what can you see

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 12:21 pm
by shakespear
closing my eyes, i see your eyes
they take me far to those shinny stars
i stretch my hands, my soul flies-
you raise your hand to stop all wars
you shout loudly come with me
look at the sky, can't you see?
all the stars and the shinny moon
come and you'll be happy soon

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:31 pm
by dreamer
come with me
share me your dream
your soul is sweet lovely to be
remove past and say hello to life

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:48 pm
by shakespear
can u bear my problems?
how can i share you?

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2016 12:08 am
by dreamer
sure i can trust me

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2016 8:52 am
by shakespear
dreamer wrote:sure i can trust me
in spite of your mistake, i got it

my role:
she told me;you can trust me
don't hesitate, and you'll see
share me, come to my chest
i'm your fate, i'll follow you to west
share me your problems, come to my lap
have a rest, have some nap
come to me, i'm your fate,
your destiny,for you, i'll wait

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 4:40 pm
by dreamer
half of you half of me
we can fix what we see
life is waiting come on
don't miss the chance it comes once
i'm your fate your other face

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 6:32 pm
by shakespear
you are my eyes, my soul
you are my nose, my lips, my mole
you flow inside me, inside my vain
flow with my blood, take my brain
at mirror, i look, i see you
trying to kiss, i kiss who?


complete please

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 8:32 pm
by dreamer
kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:33 am
by shakespear
listen to my heart, it calls you
need to be with you, no fib it's true
come treat my wounds, relieve me
remove my troubles, take the key
let's travel far, to that lovely sea
with you, i like to live and see

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 6:40 pm
by shakespear
wr r u dreamer....no reply till now, it's ur role.......ok???

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:46 am
by shakespear
dreamer wrote:kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul
YOU SAID THIS STANZA AND YOU STOPPED
I HOPE YOU COMPLETE

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 5:40 am
by dreamer
be happy now no matter what
we found our ways even in buts
just hug me no promises no shuts

ur turn

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:20 am
by shakespear
i hug you but i hug phantom
i kiss you but i kiss dust
are you alive? are you a tomb?
are you a stone? still you have lust?
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i feel i'm dead, lost my feel
no water, plants will die
your travel made me heel
you killed me when you said bye
........
i hard could write these lines..i hope in future we can get our old talent.
you have one mistake" shut" can't take "s" plural koz it's adjective here.
YOUR ROLE.....

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:29 am
by dreamer
omg still correcting my mistakes till now

you are the one who said bye
you reject me without deny
you never accept me in the way i like
you wanna me statue without cries

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 11:36 am
by shakespear
dreamer wrote:you wanna me statue without cries
if u said: you wanna me statue without cry....i think it's better to keep rhyme
u r better than me, during 9 minutes u could make these wonderful lines,
ok
my turn:
You're not a statue, you're my life
........................... I find you when I open my eyes
You're my death and its knife
............................ You're my joy, you're my cries
You're peace, and you'er strife
............................. To me, in this world, you're the prize

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:58 pm
by dreamer
come on get me wht u wait for
catch the time before it flow
show me the paradise you promised me before

Re: if you like to complete

Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2017 12:29 pm
by shakespear
i don't know
i feel i am idle
let me gather my mind