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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Feb 14, 2016 8:52 am

dreamer wrote:sure i can trust me
in spite of your mistake, i got it

my role:
she told me;you can trust me
don't hesitate, and you'll see
share me, come to my chest
i'm your fate, i'll follow you to west
share me your problems, come to my lap
have a rest, have some nap
come to me, i'm your fate,
your destiny,for you, i'll wait
our life is like a night mare

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Mon Feb 15, 2016 4:40 pm

half of you half of me
we can fix what we see
life is waiting come on
don't miss the chance it comes once
i'm your fate your other face
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Mon Feb 15, 2016 6:32 pm

you are my eyes, my soul
you are my nose, my lips, my mole
you flow inside me, inside my vain
flow with my blood, take my brain
at mirror, i look, i see you
trying to kiss, i kiss who?


complete please
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Mon Feb 15, 2016 8:32 pm

kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:33 am

listen to my heart, it calls you
need to be with you, no fib it's true
come treat my wounds, relieve me
remove my troubles, take the key
let's travel far, to that lovely sea
with you, i like to live and see
our life is like a night mare

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Mon Feb 22, 2016 6:40 pm

wr r u dreamer....no reply till now, it's ur role.......ok???
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:46 am

dreamer wrote:kiss your soul
love yourself
accept who are sure you won't be in mess
time is passing to time to waste anymore
live your day with beautiful soul
YOU SAID THIS STANZA AND YOU STOPPED
I HOPE YOU COMPLETE
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sun Sep 17, 2017 5:40 am

be happy now no matter what
we found our ways even in buts
just hug me no promises no shuts

ur turn
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:20 am

i hug you but i hug phantom
i kiss you but i kiss dust
are you alive? are you a tomb?
are you a stone? still you have lust?
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i feel i'm dead, lost my feel
no water, plants will die
your travel made me heel
you killed me when you said bye
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i hard could write these lines..i hope in future we can get our old talent.
you have one mistake" shut" can't take "s" plural koz it's adjective here.
YOUR ROLE.....
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:29 am

omg still correcting my mistakes till now

you are the one who said bye
you reject me without deny
you never accept me in the way i like
you wanna me statue without cries
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Sun Sep 17, 2017 11:36 am

dreamer wrote:you wanna me statue without cries
if u said: you wanna me statue without cry....i think it's better to keep rhyme
u r better than me, during 9 minutes u could make these wonderful lines,
ok
my turn:
You're not a statue, you're my life
........................... I find you when I open my eyes
You're my death and its knife
............................ You're my joy, you're my cries
You're peace, and you'er strife
............................. To me, in this world, you're the prize
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Re: if you like to complete

Post by dreamer » Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:58 pm

come on get me wht u wait for
catch the time before it flow
show me the paradise you promised me before
be urself

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Re: if you like to complete

Post by shakespear » Tue Sep 19, 2017 12:29 pm

i don't know
i feel i am idle
let me gather my mind
our life is like a night mare

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