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please make correct the sentenses for me

Post by orange » Mon Mar 07, 2005 6:40 am

i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)

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Post by orange » Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:49 am

It seems nobody care of my question. i'm upset now :cry:

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Post by shokin » Tue Mar 08, 2005 12:31 am

what does "of fur" mean ?

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Post by orange » Tue Mar 08, 2005 4:14 am

take notice of something is the phrase. Fur meas the hair of an animal for example cat, rabbit,sheep...

Thank you Violet and Shokin.I don't cry no more because i had you in beside. :D

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Post by yl88 » Fri Apr 01, 2005 3:51 pm

"Please take notice that the fur is falling out"

does it sound better?? :P
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Post by orange » Tue Apr 05, 2005 4:25 am

yl88 wrote:"Please take notice that the fur is falling out"

does it sound better?? :P
Maybe you are right.But in really, i don't know exactly how writing is right, i confuse of it :roll: :roll:
Thanks a lot my dear friend. Don't forget to come on sooner to help me in the next times :lol: :lol:

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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me

Post by loveisblue » Tue Apr 05, 2005 8:49 am

orange wrote:i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)

How about this one?
Pay attention, fur is falling down.

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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me

Post by orange » Tue Apr 05, 2005 9:22 am

loveisblue wrote:
orange wrote:i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)

How about this one?
Pay attention, fur is falling down.

My situation is the noticement i must make to send my partner about one kind of fabrics which have further to product bags. This further can be fall down a lolts if you don't be careful. I've ever been worried about it.Anyway I send it to my partner my writing long time ago . I think they understood what i mean b/c until now they still don't ask me what did your writting mean yet
If they ask me, i'll answer them by all of your sentences in order. They will understand what i want to say :D :D
Thank you very much and now maybe love will be orange :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me

Post by loveisblue » Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:29 pm

orange wrote: Thank you very much and now maybe love will be orange :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Yeah, orange is a beautiful colour and an orange love must be a wonderful love. hehehe :mrgreen:

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Post by orange » Wed Apr 06, 2005 3:13 am

my orange is a favorite fruit and an orange love must be a delicious love...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: :mrgreen:

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