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Postby LibertyFirst » Sun Oct 03, 2004 6:26 am

Check the sentence below please. Is it okay?

Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.

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Postby Arale » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:42 pm

Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.


Here is mine:
Actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot. You might feel hard to understand my introduction without them.

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Postby LibertyFirst » Sat Nov 13, 2004 7:07 am

Thanks.

I prefer Arale's rewriting version.


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