"The Cremation Of Sam McGee " by R.W. Service

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"The Cremation Of Sam McGee " by R.W. Service

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I just wanted to share this great poem by R.W. Service with you . I cannot understand some parts clearly ,would you help me to understand 'em better?
Its really worth reading ! Thanks folks beforehand :wink:


The Cremation Of Sam McGee
Robert W. Service

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
I cremated Sam McGee.

Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee, where the cotton blooms and blows.
Why he left his home in the South to roam 'round the Pole, God only knows.
He was always cold, but the land of gold seemed to hold him like a spell;
Though he'd often say in his homely way that he'd "sooner live in hell".

On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way over the Dawson trail.
Talk of your cold! through the parka's fold it stabbed like a driven nail.
If our eyes we'd close, then the lashes froze till sometimes we couldn't see;
It wasn't much fun, but the only one to whimper was Sam McGee.

And that very night, as we lay packed tight in our robes beneath the snow,
And the dogs were fed, and the stars o'erhead were dancing heel and toe,
He turned to me, and "Cap," says he, "I'll cash in this trip, I guess;
And if I do, I'm asking that you won't refuse my last request."

Well, he seemed so low that I couldn't say no; then he says with a sort of moan:
"It's the cursed cold, and it's got right hold till I'm chilled clean through to the bone.
Yet 'tain't being dead -- it's my awful dread of the icy grave that pains;
So I want you to swear that, foul or fair, you'll cremate my last remains."

A pal's last need is a thing to heed, so I swore I would not fail;
And we started on at the streak of dawn; but God! he looked ghastly pale.
He crouched on the sleigh, and he raved all day of his home in Tennessee;
And before nightfall a corpse was all that was left of Sam McGee.

There wasn't a breath in that land of death, and I hurried, horror-driven,
With a corpse half hid that I couldn't get rid, because of a promise given;
It was lashed to the sleigh, and it seemed to say:
"You may tax your brawn and brains,

But you promised true, and it's up to you to cremate those last remains."

Now a promise made is a debt unpaid, and the trail has its own stern code.
In the days to come, though my lips were dumb, in my heart how I cursed that load.
In the long, long night, by the lone firelight, while the huskies, round in a ring,
Howled out their woes to the homeless snows -- O God! how I loathed the thing.

And every day that quiet clay seemed to heavy and heavier grow;
And on I went, though the dogs were spent and the grub was getting low;
The trail was bad, and I felt half mad, but I swore I would not give in;
And I'd often sing to the hateful thing, and it hearkened with a grin.

Till I came to the marge of Lake Lebarge, and a derelict there lay;
It was jammed in the ice, but I saw in a trice it was called the "Alice May".
And I looked at it, and I thought a bit, and I looked at my frozen chum;
Then "Here," said I, with a sudden cry, "is my cre-ma-tor-eum."

Some planks I tore from the cabin floor, and I lit the boiler fire;
Some coal I found that was lying around, and I heaped the fuel higher;
The flames just soared, and the furnace roared -- such a blaze you seldom see;
And I burrowed a hole in the glowing coal, and I stuffed in Sam McGee.

Then I made a hike, for I didn't like to hear him sizzle so;
And the heavens scowled, and the huskies howled, and the wind began to blow.
It was icy cold, but the hot sweat rolled down my cheeks, and I don't know why;
And the greasy smoke in an inky cloak went streaking down the sky.

I do not know how long in the snow I wrestled with grisly fear;
But the stars came out and they danced about ere again I ventured near;
I was sick with dread, but I bravely said: "I'll just take a peep inside.
I guess he's cooked, and it's time I looked"; . . . then the door I opened wide.

And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm, in the heart of the furnace roar;
And he wore a smile you could see a mile, and he said: "Please close that door.
It's fine in here, but I greatly fear you'll let in the cold and storm --
Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee, it's the first time I've been warm."

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
I cremated Sam McGee.
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Beisdes, I know a very kind woman from Tennesse. She wrote poems here, too. Something strange, I'm strange too.


The first stanza of poems normally serves as an introduction. The "midnight sun" is the moon from my point of view. So, in the first stanza Service (what a name) first said that it's night, defined by the metaphor "midnight sun". So, in the midnight there are strange things done, the tales of Arctic trails, the Northern Lights, but the strangest one was in the night when the protagonist cremated McGee.

The second stanza, as the author already mentioned McGee, serves as a small characterisation of McGee's life. McGee was from Tennessee, but he was born in the South. Nobody knows why he came to the North (around the Pole), he only say "in his home he thinks would live in hell". But the reason why he stayed was because "in his home he feels that he would be living in hell."
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As the introduction of McGee is given, the third stanza describes the hard work of McGee. They even have to work on Christmas day.
It was very cold, but the coat of McGee made him warm enough. (maybe that's a personification of McGee that he is strong) (A parka is a short coat the guys in Siberia or Alaska wear.)The prove that it's really very cold is given in the 3rd line, if they close the eyes even the lashes freeze.
It wasn't much fun, but the only pitiful guy is McGee. (so this stanza tells that McGee has to work very very hard that other people definitely would pity him. But he is strong enough to stand against this.
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The next two stanzas deals with that Christmas day which has been described in the last stanza. (The poem is good as it is fluent.) This is a stylistic device which shows that the work is hard and non-stop.

It goes more detailed and describes a talk of McGee and the protagonist in the Christmas night. McGee tells the prot. about some treasure, maybe the prot. has to take it. McGee seems to know the prot. very well and he is satisfied when the treasure would be in good hands. So maybe McGee had stealed this treasure.

Because the prot is a very good friend, he went with McGee to take the treasure. A sleigh is a vehicle with which you can move on ice. Image And crouching is the postion with which you sit on a sleigh, however you don't stand on the sleigh. This stanza tells us why McGee had known that he will die. (not because of a very dangerous future adventure, as I thought) He simply knows.

Then before nightfall McGee really died.
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In the next stanza, McGee has died. And the protagonist can't get rid of "the corpse". The corpse of McGee is a "personification" (can we say it?) of the task the protagonist has to do: Take the gold. To lash means to be bind on the slay with e.g. ropes. So the corpse, being fastened to the sleigh, seems to remind him that he has to fulfill his task.

So the prot. does this job in the next stanza. (trail= way) (stern= serious) So the way was very difficult to go. The prot had a hard way, his lips were dump. In the night, the huskies (the syberian dogs who carry sleighs) sat in a round ring. ("Night" is a stylistic device called leitmotif, because it's used repeatedly in this poem. So everytime the word night appears, it could signal an important point in the text)

so, I need to work now :lol: Later I will say something about the following stanzas.
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Hmm I have some break, so I continue:

grub= slang of "food" So the journey went on and on and more and more monotonuos. And his food storage became smaller and smaller. The trail was hard for the prot.

In the next stanza he came to the marge of Lake Lebarge. And he saw a broken ship like Titanic. The ship was jammed in ice, but the prot. saw the name of the ship written on it. The ship was called the "Alice May" He looked at it and thought: This is my crematorium. A crematorium was a house in the past where corpses had been burnt. That's maybe a stylistic device called Onomaopoesie in Germany: cre-ma-torium, which decorates the word crematorium. However this stanza said that the prot. has found the place where to borrow McGee.

(Oh, and if you have to do this for a homework or something, don't forget to say that the funeral place is in a very cold place, but the prot. calls it crematorium, what is hot. So that's an Antithesis. Remember rhetorical figures always underline important points in the text.)

In the next stanza the author uses two parallalisms (some planks..., and...; some coal..., and...) (flamed soared and furnace roared) to show that the funeral of McGee is sad and monotonous. After creating such a scene the prot. buries Mc Gee. He pressed McGee into the hole he borrowed. (to stuff= to press inside)
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Sorry guys but we only can post our own works here. I move this to Help Each Other with English because you have good analyses about the poem.

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The "midnight sun" is the moon from my point of view.
me too ,and around the pole about 6 months they live in night ,and instead of sun they have midnight sun!
The ship was jammed in ice, but the prot. saw the name of the ship written on it. The ship was called the "Alice May"
is there an specific reason why the ship was called the "Alice may" ?
(Oh, and if you have to do this for a homework or something, don't forget to say that the funeral place is in a very cold place, but the prot. calls it crematorium, what is hot. So that's an Antithesis. Remember rhetorical figures always underline important points in the text.)
No,it's not my home work .
He made that cold place (that ship) into a furnace .and turned it into a very hot place to cremate McGee.
I like the way Robert Service uses parallalisms in his poems.

well...Thanks alot Admiral,You're really a master and I like the way you interprete the poem :) .

I think McGee was a greedy man ,who left his home to find gold .and he suffered alot of pain in order to have a better life in future ,a thing that never happend for him.but the prot. wasn't that much greedy."sometimes the gold isn't all" ! :roll:
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is there an specific reason why the ship was called the "Alice May" ?
Alice May was a real person who lived some years before him, maybe there could be a connection. http://math.boisestate.edu/GaS/whowaswho/M/MayAlice.htm

And this is an online interpretation of the poem. It says that the Alice May is a real ship called Olive May. As this is not your homework, I don't care which of the explanations is really right.
Robert W. Service, a Canadian poet and novelist, was known for his ballads of the Yukon. He wrote this narrative poem which is presented here because it is an outstanding example of how sensory stimuli are emphasized and it has a surprise ending.

Robert William Service was born in Preston, England, on January 16, 1874. He emigrated to Canada at the age of twenty, in 1894, and settled for a short time on Vancouver Island. He was employed by the Canadian Bank of Commerce in Victoria, B.C., and was later transferred to Whitehorse and then to Dawson in the Yukon. In all, he spent eight years in the Yukon and saw and experienced the difficult times of the miners, trappers, and hunters that he has presented to us in verse.

During the Balkan War of 1912-13, Service was a war correspondent to the Toronto Star. He served this paper in the same capacity during World War I, also serving two years as an ambulance driver in the Canadian Army medical corps. He returned to Victoria for a time during World War II, but later lived in retirement on the French Riviera, where he died on September 14, 1958, in Monte Carlo.

Sam McGee was a real person, a customer at the Bank of Commerce where Service worked. The Alice May was a real boat, the Olive May, a derelict on Lake Laberge.
Anyone who has experienced the bitterness of cold weather and what it can do to a person will empathize with Sam McGee’s feelings as expressed by Robert Service in his poem The Cremation of Sam McGee.
well...Thanks alot Admiral,You're really a master and I like the way you interprete the poem .
It was a very amusing break during my working day. I'm glad that I could help you.
I think McGee was a greedy man ,who left his home to find gold .and he suffered alot of pain in order to have a better life in future ,a thing that never happend for him.but the prot. wasn't that much greedy."sometimes the gold isn't all" !
I think gold/money is all, but McGee had to find easier ways to earn them and he had to spend them, for example for pension and wife and children.
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Admiral wrote:I think gold/money is all, but McGee had to find easier ways to earn
really??? money should be a reason for life? Oh... I don't think so!

and i think its the hardest way to find gold around the pole!
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