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[aicha]

am I correct in the punctuation?
1-Emily formerly,Mrs.Goyette caught Mr.Andless' sleeve.Where no on could see and managed;it briefly but urgently.
2-Joseph,who is Gordon's brother,is a guard on the second string.
3-Dearest,his voice broke;he could say no more.
4-Louis and then,she has it still something near to genius for making importable persons,places,and situations sound attractive.
5-Some of my courses for example:French ,and Biology demand a great deal of work outside the classroom.
6-I know-I said ,but that is not the real bed what happened to it.

[denvinbo]

am I correct in the punctuation?
1-Emily formerly,Mrs.Goyette caught Mr.Andless' sleeve.Where no one could see and managed;it briefly but urgently.
2-Joseph,whose Gordon's brother,is a guard on the second string.
3-Dearest,his voice was broken;he could say no more.
4-Louis and then,she has it still something near genius for making important persons,places,and situations sound attractively.
5-Some of my courses, for example:French ,and Biology demand a great deal of work outside the class.
6-I knew-I said ,but that was not the real bed what happened to it.

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