sentence grammar
Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:31 am
Hi, i'm not sure whether this sentence i wrote is ok in terms of grammar. Can u help?
"Past researches have shown that resonance inside tyre cavity due to road inputs through tyres causes vibration transmission to passenger compartment; so it seemed that with air contained comes the adverse effect of tyre cavity resonance."
"Past researches have shown that resonance inside tyre cavity due to road inputs through tyres causes vibration transmission to passenger compartment; so it seemed that with air contained comes the adverse effect of tyre cavity resonance."