Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage

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Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage

Postby sportsfan » Sun Dec 09, 2012 1:50 am

Hi, I'm going to share a Santa Claus song video on my facebook but I'm not sure what to say on my facebook status.

Should I say "While I've already known the truth about Santa Claus, this song is nevertheless still one of my favourite Christmas songs."?

Would you correct my grammar and vocabularies here please? Thank you.
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Re: Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage

Postby Josef » Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:51 pm

While already know the truth about Santa Claus, this song is nevertheless one of my favourite Christmas songs.

OR

While already know the truth about Santa Claus, this song is still one of my favourite Christmas songs.
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood"
prayer of the Reverend Eli Jenkins in Under Milk Wood by Dylan Thomas


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