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wetwater
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sentence help required

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is it the right sentence, i want to write an email to my server vendor.

1-"please make sure that the power supply you will send be compatible with our installed server machine"
2- " please make sure that the power supply you send be compatible with our installed server"

which one is correct or both are wrong :).
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Please make sure that the power supply you send IS compatible with our installed server.
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wetwater
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Re: sentence help required

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its a future tense why cant i write.
" please make sure that the power supply you send be compatible with our installed server"
please explain
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