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korishivu
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check my sentence is right or wrong

Post by korishivu » Fri May 27, 2016 5:24 pm

One day, I was coming from the office, I was walking on the street slowly. The street was full of vehicles and people. People were looking sad and tired. I was looking tired.

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Re: check my sentence is right or wrong

Post by knowable » Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:56 pm

In the first sentence you could use ‘and’ so as to avoid repetition of ‘I’.

E.g.,
One day I came from the office and, slowly, walked down the street. There were lot of cars and people. Everyone looked sad and tired. I was feeling tired myself.

Or,

Coming from the office one day, I walked slowly down the street. There were lot of pedestrians and traffic was heavy. People looked sad and tired and I have to say I was feeling the same.

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Re: check my sentence is right or wrong

Post by abuwasfa » Wed Jun 01, 2016 1:11 pm

i hope this will never happen in reality

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