Left and Right. Help

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Dalija
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Left and Right. Help

Post by Dalija » Wed Aug 10, 2016 10:27 am

Hello,
I`m writing lyrics for a song. This is a fragment. Are there any mistakes (including style) :roll:

I was looking to the left, and why
When right was all I could see

Thank you !

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Re: Left and Right. Help

Post by knowable » Sat Sep 03, 2016 8:17 pm

Suggestions:

I was looking to the left but all I could see was (what was) on the right.

Why was I looking to the left when all I saw was on the right?

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