to reach many people on the other side

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to reach many people on the other side

Post by susieq » Sat Nov 12, 2016 8:09 pm

Hi everyone,

Could you please tell me if my English sentence is correct? Also, is my grammar correct or my sentence too long?

My attempt: I am passionate about writing, it has always been my dream to be able to reach many people, on the other side of the (my) world, with my writings so that they may feel, see and imagine what I write.


Thank you so much.

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Re: to reach many people on the other side

Post by Joe » Mon Nov 21, 2016 5:28 am

I am passionate about writing. It has always been my dream to be able to reach many people on the other side of the world with my writings so that they may feel, see and imagine what I write.
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood"
prayer of the Reverend Eli Jenkins in Under Milk Wood by Dylan Thomas

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