Is this correct?

[Czianna]

Hi, i am new here. I'm glad i found this site and i know i will learn a lot. I am a learner.

I have a sentence below and confused f it is correct. Kindly check and correct me if im wrong. Thanks a lot.

It depends upon you on how you will maintain your simplicity, determination plays a big role or else you'll just go with the flow..

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[Joe]

Not sure I understand, but I think something like this would be waht you want:

It depends on you how you maintain your simplicity. Determination plays a big role, or else you can just go with the flow.