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glennposadas
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Help me with my vow.

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I need help. I'm a bit confused with the "These" and "This", and the "Nor" or "Or". My wedding is in a few hours and I just finished composing my vow. Here's my vow:

My love, you are my only best friend, the best friend that I've ever had. I promise you these:

I won't do things that will make you mad, make you sad, and most importantly, things that will break your heart.
I won't fight you as much as possible, I will try to understand you first.
You can count on me every single time. I will be your best friend forever no matter what happens.
I will respect you, I won't hurt you emotionally nor physically.
Lastly, I will love you forever, until the Lord take my life here on Earth.

Also, do you think I need to correct something here? Thank you!
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As much as possible I won't fight you,

emotionally or physically

until the Lord takes my life
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood :-| " — Dylan Thomas, Under Milk Wood

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