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forly
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Asking opinion

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Hi,
is anyone can help give their opinion about below sentence, is it the grammar correct or no?, cheers

Married
Is not some romantic event
Is not about lust and passion
Is not talking what we like only part of yourself with others.
From this day forward you shall not walk alone my heart will be your shelter, and my arms will be your home.
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I comment only about the word "Married". It should be "Marriage".
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