After or Because? Which do you use?

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miyuminz
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After or Because? Which do you use?

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Although I was very surprised at their advice:"Maybe you should go out and see the world rather than stay in this country.", I thought it was a good chance to prove that I was okay. ( I had to stay at home for about two years to recover from my illness.)

Which one of the following sentences should be followed in this case?
1. I had already become healthy again, and taken on different challenges to change my life.
2. Until then, I had become healthy again, and I had taken on different challenges to change my life.
3 After I had become healthy again, I had taken on different challenges to change my life.
4. Because I had become healthy again, I had taken on different challenges to change my life.
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Re: After or Because? Which do you use?

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1. I had already become healthy again, and taken on different challenges to change my life.
2. Until then, I had become healthy again, and I had taken on different challenges to change my life. :nok:
3. After I had become healthy again, I had taken on different challenges to change my life. :ok:
4. Because I had become healthy again, I had taken on different challenges to change my life.

I think 3 is the one you want but it's a difficult question because it's rather subjective and only you understand the whole story (even though I appreciate you have tried to explain it :roll:).

2 is definitely not right (it's not really English) :twisted:
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood :-| " — Dylan Thomas, Under Milk Wood

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