can anyone check the grammar?
The Wall Bars 230cm are a piece of home workout equipment perfect for developing strength, conditioning and flexibility. They come in different sizes. The wooden wall bars are one of our bestsellers. As they do not take up much space and are easy to maintain, they are perfect for flats. Beech wood is compact, durable and extremely flexible. The wall bars are coated with unique varnish which is not only odorless and non-toxic, but also makes them rigid and flexible.
Wall bars are a truly classic piece of sports equipment- there's hardly a gym without one!
Their versatility makes wall bars perfect for the full-body workout (for strengthening abdominals, back, buttocks, leg and arm muscles). Stall bars can be a very effective tool for building flexibility and mobility in the whole body.
Stall bars are used for a variety of exercises (chin-ups and pull-ups, leg lifts of different types, and “flagpole” or sideways handstands, to name a few), and they can be tailored to a variety of activities and purposes.
Description :
The product is made of high quality beech wood.
The product is protected with water-based lacquer, which is safe for children.
Swedish ladder has 13 wooden crossbars (depending on size).
Weight capacity up to 170 kg. Can be used by adults.
Specification
Consist of:
1. Gymnastic wall bar 13 wooden rungs.
2. Mounting hardware.
3. Assembly instructions.
The other dimensions of the wall bars:
Price to be negotiated. Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.
We have been working in this business for over 18 years.
We export our products to many European countries.
For each sale we issue an invoice or a receipt sent to you either by e-mail or post.
Can anyone check the grammar?
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Re: Can anyone check the grammar?
It's ok
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Re: Can anyone check the grammar?
I am not sure about these two expressions as below.
1. ... to name a few)...
2. Consist of: ---> Consists of:
1. ... to name a few)...
2. Consist of: ---> Consists of:
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Re: Can anyone check the grammar?
JamesWatson may be right about #2, but it's hard to say without seeing the exact product. Since you describe the product in the plural (Wall Bars), "consist of" seems acceptable. But it's true that "consists of" might be more appropriate. Need to see a photo, really
Nothing wrong with #1, to name a few
Nothing wrong with #1, to name a few
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Re: Can anyone check the grammar?
Thanks Joe.Joe wrote: ↑Thu Aug 16, 2018 9:05 am JamesWatson may be right about #2, but it's hard to say without seeing the exact product. Since you describe the product in the plural (Wall Bars), "consist of" seems acceptable. But it's true that "consists of" might be more appropriate. Need to see a photo, really
Nothing wrong with #1, to name a few