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BonKither
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Does this sentence sound correct?

Post by BonKither » Sun Sep 30, 2018 8:04 pm

Hi,

could you help me with the following sentence?


"I am absolutely excited and motivated about starting this process with your distinguished company. My wish is that, at the end of it, we could find ourselves to fulfil our reciprocal professional needs."

Does the part in italic sound ok to you? For some reason it does not to me.

Thanks

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Re: Does this sentence sound correct?

Post by justoneplay » Sun Sep 30, 2018 9:22 pm

Nope.....I would eliminate "find ourselves to" .
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Re: Does this sentence sound correct?

Post by Joe » Sat Oct 06, 2018 3:53 am

justoneplay wrote:
Sun Sep 30, 2018 9:22 pm
Nope.....I would eliminate "find ourselves to" .
Agree :ok:
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