Hi,
could you help me with the following sentence?
"I am absolutely excited and motivated about starting this process with your distinguished company. My wish is that, at the end of it, we could find ourselves to fulfil our reciprocal professional needs."
Does the part in italic sound ok to you? For some reason it does not to me.
Thanks
Does this sentence sound correct?
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Re: Does this sentence sound correct?
Nope.....I would eliminate "find ourselves to" .
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Re: Does this sentence sound correct?
Agree
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