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EddiDir
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Could you correct my question?

Post by EddiDir » Mon Nov 12, 2018 2:51 pm

Hi guys, I think I got a little problem with this question's grammar:

"What problems do you have with your garden, that you would appreciate a guide that teaches you how to solve them?"

Any suggestions for corrections?

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Re: Could you correct my question?

Post by jonathanrace » Tue Nov 13, 2018 7:56 am

"What problems do you have with your garden, that you would like someone to help solve?" The original is very wordy. This sentence expresses what you want without getting lost in itself.
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