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'economic' sentence

Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2019 4:07 pm
by pachora
Ciao. I have a question relating to the grammatical acceptability of the sentence below:

"The risk is that, given the heavy reliance on tourism, a further slowdown in revenues from foreign travelers would easy throw the balance of trade into an unsustainable deficit, that can only be corrected primarily through a sharp currency depreciation."

thank you in advance for your help

Re: 'economic' sentence

Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2019 8:50 pm
by Joe
The risk is that, given the heavy reliance on tourism, a further slowdown in revenues from foreign travelers would EASILY throw the balance of trade into an unsustainable deficit[,] that COULD only be corrected primarily through a sharp currency depreciation.

Delete the comma